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for A Ghostly Curse

by ShilohDarke

schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sneaky Lucius. lol. I love that mind of his.
person firewall
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoohoo! a selfless Lucius?!! He's also got a wicked sense of humour. I know I'm ready for the next chapter.
person Janeplay
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool! More please. I totally understand your comment at the beginning of chapter one, but I haven't been inspired to write a story from it yet. Way to go!!!
person Carine
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmh!Ireally enjoy your great story;the noble pureblood Malfoy is at the mercy of the mudblood Granger!!
I can't wait for your next update to know where the quest of lucius'body will lead them;)
Sureves Epans
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Hermione has "balls" thats for sure:-)) She also without a doubt gave Lucius something to think about (and look at):-)) I look forward to the next chapter and I look forward for the two of them exploring the secrets of Malfoy Mansion!
person bel_amour
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh i love it. it was soooooo good i cannot wait to see what happens next, please update soon.
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg.... that was AWESOME! I LOVED this chapter! Go Hermoine! You've made her a sharp-witted match for Lucius. Please keep that up. This chapter was hilarious. Lucius expecting Hermoine to drop everything immediately for his convenience reminded me of my husband just now. How is it men expect everything to always revolve around them, even when it's plain as day that we have other things to do? lol. Ah well. Update SOOOOON!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person 999
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha So Hermione is kind of lippy...isn't she? That's hilarious!

I can understand Lucius being upset though, after all, he isn't really dead, so technically, they really didn't have the right to sell his house. If Lucius were to get his body back, Hermione might very well lose her claim on her property, but then again, Lucius might go to jail for the murder of Narcissa.

But of course, that is all just background stuff. I want to see what happens when Hermione gets out of the bathroom. After all, Lucius has now just been challenged twice!!! I'm sure he's not going to take that lying down, or maybe he will. hahaha Please update soon!
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee, getting interesting!!!! Poor Lucius, I wonder if Hermione's 'guts' will last!!! Can't wait for the next chapter - perfect as always.

Theia
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schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh she's a right little tease isn't she?

Poor, poor Lucius.

She has now just opened up Pandora's box. I hope he 'punishes' her for such an act.