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A great update! Its nice to get the background story, it helps build the caracters in my mind. I do now look forward to the searching of Malfoy Manor, I think that could be rather trilling:-)

LaBibliographe 2007-05-20 id # 3000101897
Chapter 5: How sad for everyone that Severus and Ginny had to buy their happiness at the expense of Hermione's. OH, WELL!!! She's going to get Lucius so all's well that ends well. (I can see that Snape always wanted Ginny, but why did Ginny so quickly choose Snape if she had been in love with Harry? That seems a little disloyal to Hermione unless there was a great love between Ginny and Snape. But that seems remote if Ginny had been so crazy about Harry. I realize Snape went after Ginny but did she have to reciprocate?


I like that Hermione has put the past behind her (sort of - we'll let Lucius shove it the rest of the way out of her life) and is now ready to help him with his problem. She's admitted she liked him in her dream giving her a thrill. Now I hope he REALLY turns on the heat.

So Lucius has gotten over his antipathy for Hermione owning his home? I suppose her positive qualities - female, pretty, ready for seduction - had something to do with it. He's controlled by his Mr. Wiggly, isn't he? (Reference to the movie, Lethal Weapon)

Those unexplored chambers probably have myriads of material for a few chapters, huh? I suppose she'd have to fall asleep in each room to get the full effect, though. Maybe Lucius can haul a cot with him while they're traversing the chambers.

Lovely chapter, if a little sad for Hermione. So what was Snape like in bed? Will Hermione tell Lucius so we can all find out? Puleeease?

Omigosh, where am I? What have I done? Did I type all that? I feel like I was hypnotized into writing a review. (Casts an inimical eye on Shiloh who looks a little guilty.) Hmmmmm.....

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This typo changes the meaning of the entire sentence or I wouldn't bother you -

"she had every right to be apart of the world she so loved" It needs to be "a part" - two words, not one.

LOL you beg so nicely for a review....how could I resist! I am so enjoying this story, especially the interplay between Lucius and Hermione. The Snape and Hermione ship is so popular that your having Snape as the unfeeling idiot in this story grabs me as a reader. I'm looking forward to reading more and soon. See I can beg for a new chapter.

This is great! *subliminal message to send a review worked*

loved it please update soon.

Absolutely lovely! This is definately a great plot. It always boggles my mind how people manage to come up with such splendid ideas. And I just love the way you have written Lucius. He has to be one of the most complex characters to write, at least in my mind. It's hard to keep him in character and also keep him from going too far to one end of the behavior spectrum or another. You have manage to do such a great job of making him so sharp and acidic, terribly sexy (when isn't he?), and yet emotional when the time arises. I cannot wait for the next update!

I am enjoying this story a lot! Update soon, please.

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks

I love this story! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Oh I seriously like this (just as I like every other fic you have)!! You have such a talent to write, honestly. Especially the Lucius/Hermione ones. When I was reading chapter 4 I was like "hmm...so...Ginny Potter, that means she left Harry and went to Severus" and I wondered HOW Ginny could do something like that, considering she had "fancied" Harry ever since she was 10 and I wondered how Harry was coping with everything. But with chapter 5 I *finally* understood.

Hope you update soon!