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Resisting the urge to jump up and down, clapping hands gleefully, as that would disturb the family! So glad to see you back! Now, what ever shall Nagini be planning?

I realize that as a truly working writer you have little time for this, but PLEASE don't leave us hanging for too long! So Nagini is free of Bella, but will she be going after Lucius as well, since you did have her thinking about her own vengeance in an earlier chapter? And if the curse has been reflected onto the caster, is there a risk of it recurring on Draco at some later point or did it dissipate when Bella was killed? (perhaps I'm being stupid, here, but I wasn't sure about that) Or will Nagini start her own takeover? If this is an example of your writing a bit of fluff, I wish I knew what name you publish under, I'd like to read your stuff when you're being serious!

I just love this story! So interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

(I just took a look at your original stories at gypsyshadow; I was reading some excerpts, and I was wondering if someone checked your French words... I know that French is one of the most difficult languages (yes, even for us!), so that's why, when I find a mistake, I can't help to try to correct it... well, what I wanted to say is that it's 'mon amour', not 'ma amour'. Because 'amour' starts with a vowel. And if I don't close that window right now, I'm going to give a grammar lesson in a review :s)

Well, anyway, I hope you will update soon! :)

I like it. Please update soon.

Love it, Love it, Love it!
More PLEASE???
Blessings & Chocolate cookies for muse consumption!
Amethystique
xx

This is AMAZING so far! I almost had to be draged away from the computer, because I did not want to stop reading long enough to go to work. I cant wait for more!

Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

The lovemaking at the beginning of this chapter was so beautifully done, so romantic.

It's been a long time coming but I'm sure glad it's here!!!
Can you update soon PLEASE?????
Offers gifts of sugar quills, honeydukes best & droobles for the muse
Blessings
Amethystique
xxxx

Yea your back! Although I wish that you didn't have such a crappy publisher :(

I love the new chapter! Poor Draco, just when he thought he was getting his life back. Glad that Hermione and Lucius are now out of the room, maybe they can figure out how to stop Bella!