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Oh, it's delightful! UPDATE.

yeah!go lucius!!!!i love this story,and i would like to help Hermione in her research of Lucius's body!!!ghghggh!!!
keeps going on!
ciaociao
terry

Thank you for the new chapter. It was great! Seems Sev was getting a little bit jealous that Hermione had a sucker bite. I think if I were Gin I would have been a bit pertrub with my man for acting that way.

waiting for more. hurray up

I just loved Lucius's appearance to Severus just soon after him seeing Draco. That just made my day to see Severus's not quite his assured self. The nice little lemon drop at the end was perfect.

Great Chapter! Very Yummy. It seems Severus is still posessive of Hermione even though he has Ginny, must be the Slytherin in him, but Lucius is a Slytherin as well so it should be interesting. Looking forward to updates.

It was a great chapter - keep them coming - this story is very interesting. It would be cool to have Severus become insanely jealous at some point only to have Hermione shoot him down for Lucius. It would serve him right if he were to realize that his love for Ginny was a misplaced love for Lily and that Hermione was his equal.

Sorry - computer locked before I finished review. Maybe after Lucius gets his body (things will heat up) - maybe Severus could stumble upon Hermione and Lucius doing the deed and realize "Oh God - what have I given up."
Eat your heart out Severus.

i am truly enjoying this fic.
Snape is such an ass. not for leaving HG but for treating her with distance as if she is to blame for them separating. that being said i think it is appropriate for you to write him this way. it makes sense that he wold misplace Any feelings of guilt and funnel them into venom and disdain whith little empathy for the one he hurt. after all SS, do to the life he has led, is a damaged person, and bound to be psychological a little twisted.
however i do see Ginny taking him to task for this behavior. she has a healthy sense of guilt associated to her past wrongs. hence why i can see Hermione rekindling a friendship with her.
i hope you continue to regularly update. it is so nice to see fan fic where the personalities are not plastic, and have true depth.

I loved this!! I loved how Severus had to face the feelings of Hermione beeing able to live very well without him. Must have been a blow to his ego, very well done Hermione!
I am a bit nervous about meeting this new professor of yours, somethings tell me that you wouldn't bring another female into the story for other reasons than to hurt Hermiones feelings. I sure feels that having one man leaving her and betraying her the way Severus did was more than enough. Anyway, a truly brilliant story, I really love it! Update again soon.

Chapter 8: Oh, I adore Severus' snit that Hermione has moved on without caring about him any more. That does my heart good. (I told you I wasn't sweet-natured like her.) The hickey mark on her neck was inspired. Nyah, nyah, Severus!

A double shock for our mean, old Severus: Draco's alive and Lucius is a ghost. Ooh, you're getting him good in this chapter.

Wow. Double wow! Fisting. That Lucius certainly has an fascinating repertoire and it sounds like he's just shown her a only little slice of what he's capable of. My goodness, what next? I love Lucius when he slips off the goody-two-shoes radar into more 'creative' loveplay.

IS it love yet? Perhaps it's too soon yet for them to be more than sexually attracted to each other. They don't have enough going for them yet, I guess, to feel more. We'll need many more chapters of lemonade, lemon pie, lemon drops, lemon grass (oops, how did that get in there?)

Now about this DADA professor - will she be a match for Draco or is she much older than he is? And you are planning a gruesome end for Bellatrix, I hope.

Sexy, naughty chapter - just the way I like them - great work. Thanks for sharing and tell your muse she's outdone herself.