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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it's over the top at all the sex in the story seems (to me at least) to be an important part of the whole thing. I am not sure that Hermione's character, as you have her written, would want to find Lucius's body as badly as she does if it weren't for the physical attraction she is feeling toward him and the physical pleasure she is recieving from him.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always! I've been following your stories for quite some time and I love each and every one of them! Very well done and I hope you update soon! =D
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. LOL. I like seeing the growing development in Lucius and Hermione's relationship, it's really coming along nicely. I agree with Hermione that they better find Lucius' body soon, 'cause I am sure the sex will be a lot better. LOL.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all let me assure you that the sex-scenes in your story are very well done and fit the plot very, very well!
Seccond, I am very happy that Ginny now have the honour of beeing married to Severus. If he can't stay faithful to the one he is supposed to love so much while she is pregnant with his child, there is no reason to believe that he would ever be faithful. Please, please don't ever let Hermione fell into his bed again in this story, that will most certenly ruin the story for me, he doesn't deserve her, but he deserves to know what he has lost for ever. I hope Lucius will realise that his "pureblood" ideas are rather daft, and that he is smart enough to hold on to Hermione. After what she went through with Severus, I think Lucius will have very little leeway with regards to mistake in their relationship, as it should be. I love the smut and the battle of wills, but "my" Hermione will have a backbone and self respect even if she is in love. Besides, I could easily in my mind see Severus and Lucius sitting in front of a fire, nursing a glass of firewhiskey and Lucius telling Severus how pregnant hormones make Hermione even more wanton and demanding in their bed (or where ever else she wants to "enjoy" him:-)) I can see the twitch in his eye, knowing what he has not. That scene makes a very, very beautyful picture in my mind:-)))
Seccond, I am very happy that Ginny now have the honour of beeing married to Severus. If he can't stay faithful to the one he is supposed to love so much while she is pregnant with his child, there is no reason to believe that he would ever be faithful. Please, please don't ever let Hermione fell into his bed again in this story, that will most certenly ruin the story for me, he doesn't deserve her, but he deserves to know what he has lost for ever. I hope Lucius will realise that his "pureblood" ideas are rather daft, and that he is smart enough to hold on to Hermione. After what she went through with Severus, I think Lucius will have very little leeway with regards to mistake in their relationship, as it should be. I love the smut and the battle of wills, but "my" Hermione will have a backbone and self respect even if she is in love. Besides, I could easily in my mind see Severus and Lucius sitting in front of a fire, nursing a glass of firewhiskey and Lucius telling Severus how pregnant hormones make Hermione even more wanton and demanding in their bed (or where ever else she wants to "enjoy" him:-)) I can see the twitch in his eye, knowing what he has not. That scene makes a very, very beautyful picture in my mind:-)))
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story!! I love the suspence in it...anyway can't wait for more so update soon!
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh woman I want to slap your bottom! She let Severus and Ginny get away with it much to easily...bloody bastards *mad for Hermione* hehe although I'm chuffed that Ginny didn't have anything to do with Draco thank the gods there is like an unwritten Draco rule amongst Hermione fans...if he isn't with her then he's gay *Snorts* or maybe that's just my rule? *laughing* alright off to read more :D love that Lucius is wicked :D
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stmaps foot* I wanted her to be really cold with Ginny, if you haven't guessed already Ihate Ginny but love your Lucius hehe he's so yum!@
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! She was cold! And Severus is fooling himself if he thinks he's not jealous, how did Ginny not pick up on that she is incredibly stupid...I hate her so much LOL zomg you are a dirty girl for that Lucius hand I nearly fell off my chair in shock :D