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for A Ghostly Curse

by ShilohDarke

person Hermione rulz
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOl! Never saw that one coming!! Update soon!
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I was finally able to sit down and read the 11 chapters you have posted so far. I really love this story. Even Severus as the bad guy has me intriuged. He is such an ass, he is married but still want Hermione. I think he needs a reality check. I can't wait to read more.
person firewall
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - You made me laugh aloud. Your author notes were priceless today. It sounds like you definitely went with your writer's muse. I could just imagine the stunned look on your face. Between shagging a statue, giving Severus the short straw and consolidating plans for a very hot threesome, you have some interesting ideas for us to look forward to. Very cute.

Anyway, great chapter. I liked that Lucius ran interference between Hermione and Severus. I also liked the fact that Draco pointed out to Hermione that she was betrayed by more than just Severus. Angelina will keep Draco on his toes, hmmmmmmm.... Looking forward to the next installment.
person dragon37
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione should fuck the statue, while severus watches. lol
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter, hope Hermione doesn't need to do Snape and Hope Ginny and Snape have a bit of misery, it would do the old heart a wonder of good. Keep up the good work
person pickles87
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One things for certain even if the statue doesn't come to life immediately Hermione should have hours of fun.
*snickers*
sorry couldn't help myself.
it would be interesting if they could get the current mrs snape in disguise of the former mrs snape and get him caught in the act...
great chapter.
thanks for the new read.
waiting for more.
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL. That was the funniest ending I ever read...I can't believe Snape still wants to sleep with Hermione even though he is married to Ginny. He's such an ass. Oh well. The idea of the statue room being the place where Lucius' body is located was ingenious. The concept reminded me of the temples in India with statues of couples in numerous sexual positions. Before Indians worshiped a sort of mother-goddess figure, and women were considered to be vessels of this power, and that is why sex had more meaning than just procreation; for many women, held the power to allow a man to reach nirvana. If woman ruled the world, it would be so different. *blushes* Ah, went off on an intellectual adventure.

Loving the story so very much though. The sexual tension is so stifling, I can't wait for the real moment. LOL.
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, another brilliant chapter!!! While I love my Hermione/Severus stories (the pairing that first got me into fanfiction at all), I don't mind that he sometimes is the "bad guy", as long as Hermione has someone bette at hand:-) Draco spoke the words of truth, Ginny did betray Hermione by getting involved with her best friends husband, it seems like Ginny got the shortest straw with regards to Severus, but she made her own bed. I look forward to see the solution you have in mind for Hermione to "rescue" Lucius, and don't you dare letting Severus have his wicked way again, he doesn't deserve Hermione at all, he let her go and should live with seeing her happy with someone else. The idea of letting him know what fidelity in a marriage means is a lesson way overdue.
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm so I guess basketa sugar-free sherbert-lemons won't do hmm?
lovely to see Draco wake up so, ahh..., happy!!!
Poor Severus wants both sides of the fence. I hope he comes out happy in the end...
person Dreamy_Dragon
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story very much and always look forward to the next update. The interaction between Lucius and Hermione is wonderful. I hope he won't kick her out of the Manor once he is re-united with his body. I wonder if part of his sneakiness will return with his body? Draco and Angelina are sweet together, but I am glad you decided to reserve the lemons for Lucius and Hermione. All in all delightful chapter and I hope to read more soon.