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for Do You Still Believe?

by YamiBakura

schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im already kind of hooked to this fic!
How many chaps is it going to have
hope u update soon..Mwah!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i almost died laughing at the martha stewart comment. seriously that was great!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapter, things are definately starting to heat up now. i love that you've got Luna as a character in your story i love her strange ability to say something that's extremely useful but sound like she's totally bonkers she's one of my favorite characters from the books. i'm glad that you stayed true to Harry's abilites like using his talent as a parselmouth to get information on the target that they were after. i wonder why him speaking in parseltongue bothered Draco??? interesting. and then there's the current psycho serial on the loose, it sounds like the pureblood is one seriously messed up individual torturing his victim for hours before hacking them up with a knife but whose ever seen a serial killer that was kind to his victims. i cant wait to find out who it is? please update soon.
person js
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool story...I'm interested in seeing what other ways Draco can get under Harry's skin.
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8!!! Someone Draco knew?
person SP777
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

Martha Stewart, indeed...and then Draco had the NERVE to smile like an angel
with a halo & wings, like he didn't do ANYthing wrong! :-D

I can see you're building up the camaraderie between the 2 young men, keep
it up!

You know for a second I thought I had to snatch you away from Lomonaaren's
story just to get you back to your story. *tsk* I SAW you, don't deny it.
person L_C
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fab chap :) bring on the next x
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!! I hope she's not the next victim because they really didn't check to see if she would be safe.
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! cant wait for the next update. i wonder if Draco even knows who martha stewart is? well it looks as though things are about to get intresting with a killer targeting purebloods on the loose. i wonder who he's gotten so far.
person Excilda
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know Tom Felton does have a wonderful voice. I accidentally found his songs for the first time around 5, 6 months ago.

I also know what you mean about the writing thing sometimes a chapter just flows and is easy to write but other times its like molasses in January.

Anyway good story very original but Harry seems to be giving in to easily, especially around Draco.