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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why not research the knife? Did she slip him something? Is she part of what's happening? I soooo soooo need more!!!
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you did in fact have Draco grow up a bit, and I agree that most stories are rather boring when there has been no character development. For some reason, I'm also relieved that Draco is not totally goody-goody either. He's not completely changed then, which helps Harry as well when it comes to dealing with the past.
I hope Harry gets well from his fever, if in fact it's just a passing sickness. If not....
Reading this chapter, I'm sure you wanted your readers to quickly suspect Littlewood to having poison harry, as well as be the murderer of the purebloods. I'm not so sure. It might turn out to be her, but I think you might put a twist into the story somehow instead. And I do wonder, if it is her, it might explain, kind of, her infatuation with purebloods. Will this murderer go after Harry now, or even Draco? The murderer might stand a better chance with capturing Draco, not that I'm looking forward to a scene like that.
Anyway, I'm glad you appreciate my review. I really hope you update soon. Can't wait till you do! Looking soooo forward to the next chapter : )
I hope Harry gets well from his fever, if in fact it's just a passing sickness. If not....
Reading this chapter, I'm sure you wanted your readers to quickly suspect Littlewood to having poison harry, as well as be the murderer of the purebloods. I'm not so sure. It might turn out to be her, but I think you might put a twist into the story somehow instead. And I do wonder, if it is her, it might explain, kind of, her infatuation with purebloods. Will this murderer go after Harry now, or even Draco? The murderer might stand a better chance with capturing Draco, not that I'm looking forward to a scene like that.
Anyway, I'm glad you appreciate my review. I really hope you update soon. Can't wait till you do! Looking soooo forward to the next chapter : )
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So you ARE neglecting other fandoms, rofl.
Yo! Yuutousei here - a former lurker who can now review stuffs since she's got an AFF account now.
Another wonderful chapter - thanks for taking the time to write it! Good luck on your original works and tell us all when it's published and prettyful! I'd love to buy it!
Yo! Yuutousei here - a former lurker who can now review stuffs since she's got an AFF account now.
Another wonderful chapter - thanks for taking the time to write it! Good luck on your original works and tell us all when it's published and prettyful! I'd love to buy it!
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Im glad ur still alive nd updateing! This story is still amazingly intriguing!
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
So this is one of those stories where Lily Evans is actually adopted and is a pureblood... : ) cool. But not so cool now that harry and draco are both targets now. I'm sure Harry can handle himself, in the right state of mind. But what about Draco? In this far into the story, it doesn't seem likely that Harry realizes what he would do to keep Draco safe. But I'm sure with a bit more chapters, something is likely to happen.
I only hope that poor Harry gets through this alright. I sympathize for him.
As for Draco, I also wonder how he got all this patience to deal with all this. What changed him to make him seem not-so-immmature? Will he be able to put up with Harry for much longer? What will happen once this one-year partnership is over?
: ) I'm sure you'll answer all these questions eventually, and I wait for them as well as your next chapter. I hope you update soon, because the suspense is gripping. Already looking forward to it!! : )
So this is one of those stories where Lily Evans is actually adopted and is a pureblood... : ) cool. But not so cool now that harry and draco are both targets now. I'm sure Harry can handle himself, in the right state of mind. But what about Draco? In this far into the story, it doesn't seem likely that Harry realizes what he would do to keep Draco safe. But I'm sure with a bit more chapters, something is likely to happen.
I only hope that poor Harry gets through this alright. I sympathize for him.
As for Draco, I also wonder how he got all this patience to deal with all this. What changed him to make him seem not-so-immmature? Will he be able to put up with Harry for much longer? What will happen once this one-year partnership is over?
: ) I'm sure you'll answer all these questions eventually, and I wait for them as well as your next chapter. I hope you update soon, because the suspense is gripping. Already looking forward to it!! : )
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 9!!! Harry a pureblood?! Did Dumbledore know this? The Dursleys couldn't protect him then. Oh what a mess! Not only does Harry have to face this new information but his past as well! He never had to know those horrible people!
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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. So far I have really enjoyed this, I love the pace and plot! I can't wait for an update so I'll leave my email and maybe you'll shoot me a message when a new chap is about to go up? Maybe? Maybe? Huh? LOL, If it where possible, I give you 6 stars and two thumbs up... Um, and I can't think I anything else other than cookies or brownies or something :D. Luvs and wishes for updates are sent your way! - iamtheanti@tmail.com
Ps - lol, the capacha for sending this review is "snow britt". I just found that entertaining!
Ps - lol, the capacha for sending this review is "snow britt". I just found that entertaining!
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
1. I've come to a final conclusion that I DO like it when an author puts the
Parseltongue speech in a story since it wasn't used much in canon...AND if
you write that it can be completely seductive...convincingly enough...I'll
believe you.
2. I don't recall reading any of Maya's stories [..I've probably have..], but
when you've read every other story within 240+ pages in this section, well things
start to get blurry.
NOW, if only I can get YaoiObsessed away from Lomonaaeren's stories I'll be set...for
now. :-)
1. I've come to a final conclusion that I DO like it when an author puts the
Parseltongue speech in a story since it wasn't used much in canon...AND if
you write that it can be completely seductive...convincingly enough...I'll
believe you.
2. I don't recall reading any of Maya's stories [..I've probably have..], but
when you've read every other story within 240+ pages in this section, well things
start to get blurry.
NOW, if only I can get YaoiObsessed away from Lomonaaeren's stories I'll be set...for
now. :-)
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok i just kinda have to say ewww in your details of the body. don't get me wrong it was great and all but still really gross lol.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter
this story, though kinda sad because of who harry's become, is still drawing me in
very good chapter
cant wait for the next one
-Kyle
this story, though kinda sad because of who harry's become, is still drawing me in
very good chapter
cant wait for the next one
-Kyle