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for Better This Way

by snapescauldron

schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Excellent, excellent story so far. :)
person Ladyaph
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I came upon this by accident and got a pleasant few mins distraction. Your story seems to be comming along nicley the pathos of hermione ans severus is shown well. But if I was anything do do with them I would bang their heads together and tell them both to start acting like the adults they are supposed to be. I bet you get frustrated with them too!

Good work will tune in to see how it develops
person annie
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aahhh nooooooooo!!!! they can't move on!!! no no no no!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Was so happy to see such a quick update. I really hope that Hermione does not fall for Viktor. Can not see what happens to bring the starcrossed lovers back together, hopefully a little angst and Hermione has to come to the rescue. UPdate again soon.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person snapeaddiction
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so quickly!! This story is off to a great start!!!!!!!
person Katha
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My gosh.... It's so terrible :D ...how can he be so stupid?!?
Oh I hope they meet soon... I love this story so much .. I want to marry it and have lots of little baby stories ;)

Love
person Kim
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and story line. I hope Sev gets his act together soon. I think a little competition with Vickie will speed things along. Update as soon as you can. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person AnnaV
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY...loving it so far!