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for Better This Way

by snapescauldron

person Katha
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO.. gosh... don't let this happen!! xD ... love it!! :)
person Kris
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you update with two chapters a day. I cant wait for two new chapters tomorrow! And I have a feeling someone is going to have a baby, and someone needs to find that box with the ring in it.
person Ladyaph
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wahh Wahh "now I know i've got a heart coz It's breaking" uncontollable sobbing comming from here. Paper hankie stock definatly depleted now using loo roll and hubby having a fine laugh at me for snivelling over a story, No dinner for him tomorrow

It was another fine chapteer loved the cliff hangers they made me want to continue the story. God Severus better get off his bum and no something soon instead of drowing his sorrys in brady or what other comes to hand or he is going to lose that girl for sure.

I think Mr and Mrs Ganger must suspect her heart is not really in thsi so clled marriage perhaps ther is hope if her mum or dad think staight

Will tune in for upsate as soon as I can

(forgot you might be american not British Hankie = Kleemex)
person Kim
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great updates. Again this is a wonderful story. Love it!!!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, tragic. I do hope she gets back together with him. What a fool he was for letting her go. *sigh*
person Queeny
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ugh the first chapter is so sad xD waah
person Queeny
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Milla already ~
person Queeny
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rosemerta and Severus is a nice suprise pairing!
person Queeny
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up with chapter seven!!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can not believe you stopped there. Update Update