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for Better This Way

by snapescauldron

person annie
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! omg i don't know why but i seriously almost cried right at the end there!! i hope this is one of those stories where they meet back up and get back together and she finds out that he was going to propose that night! cuz otherwise i don't know if i can keep reading if it doesn't end happy like that!

keep writing!! it's fantastic!!!!
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad beginning but please continue
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! how sad! Please don't abandon this. I want a happy ending!!! Pretty please? How selfless of him to let her think he doesn't care so she can be free to go to that job. How stupid of him to not realize how hurt she will be, and how unhappy as well!

SD
person Kim
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person sinbad
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a sad start, I hope future chapters will be happier.
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG

This isso heartbreaking!!
And don't you dare to abandon this stroy like so many other authors do!
The beginning is just awesome!

I would LOVE to read more...SOON :)

Love Tradgedy
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this is going. Please write more!!!
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon.
person snapeaddiction
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
person meg
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plz update sooner