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for Better This Way

by snapescauldron

schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Severus I can understand, drunk and extremly lonely can cause you to do stupid things. Hermione and Viktor thats well just hope Severus gets into the picture soon and makes thing right. Severus angst or h/c bringing Hermione back would be great.

Thanks for the quick updates.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update! I hope the next chapter comes out as quickly. :)
person Katha
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My God... This is sooo sad :( ... can't believe he let her go..
I hope you update soon... I really love it :)
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please more updates today i really like it.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter and I really am looking forward to the two reuniting and I really hope Severus does something quick not to loose her again. Severus needs to stop thinking with his head and use his heart when it comes to Hermione. Herminone is not like other women he may have known, who hurt Severus to the point he is like this??? Update soon.
person sinbad
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I didn't even notice the errors. I like the journey of a story, and seldom worry about technicalities. I can't wait until Severus and Hermione get back together, but don't make it too easy.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I really love this story Please update some more Pleasee''
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent yet again! Absolutely loving this story. :D
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far! Very much looking forward to the next chapter! :D