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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great...except Albus died a lot longer than two weeks away? And Ginny would have been sixteen, not fifteen. So hrm, aside from factual issues, not bad. :)
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marie1:: Sorry hon! First story. Thanks so much fo rhte review!
redprimitiva:: Hehe I always make that mictake. Thanks!
redprimitiva:: Hehe I always make that mictake. Thanks!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, I like your Ginny very much, I'm gonna check your other works.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. i really wasn't expecting molly to turn up at the end but oddly it worked really well. the shock of walking in one her daughter have anal sex with a man somehow made it all the more surprising and shocking than her simply walking in on them having sex. nice work - (although it should be cigArette not cigErette)