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for Forgotten memories

by Desirable

person ckeeki
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, to be so in love.... Can't wait to read more! :D

Only one criticism, you need to paragraph your chapters, for easier reading.
person JaynaM
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! more soon

Jayna
xxx
person Kay_Rage
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
From the summary and the first chapter. I am kind of curious as to where this is going to go. Its very descrptive and thats what has me hooked. Keep writing!!