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for A Day When Nobody Dies

by Kalinx

person ~0~
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. But you have given me a mental image from the first chapter that won't go away.
Right after Voldemort and Snape make their offer for Harry to join the dark side;
Harry looks at Voldemort and informs him the REAL reason for him making the switch was Snapes offer over Voldemorts.
"Woo! Better marks bitch" *dances*

You got that image just stuck in my mind. Thank you.
person Kaitlyn
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

The Tom/Harry moment at the end of chapter 2 was the best!!
person Aalto
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very interesting. And good reading. Though you could use a beta, you're missing quite a few 'I' and suchs. But other than that... Very intersting, and very well written so far. Please, do keep writing and update soon.
person kunitsu
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is defenitely worth reading and I would like to see more of this. I'm loving this. Update soon.
person DragZ
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now this is what I call a story with a cool twist .. hope you do continue.. Pritty please

DragZ
person Vittani
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaawwww that last line was cute. I so love a good dark fic. Hhhhmmmm need more, much more.
person kallipso
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love love love. I like the interactions that you have going. I can't wait to read more.
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really nice work, I enjoyed it a lot.