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for Bad Harry

by LovelyPair

person Chibes
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Spelling errors as long as it is legible is alright in my book...

Updating any of your stories will make me love ya forever...yes I've noticed in practically all your stories you leave us poor fans hanging...(stories on the list I am eagerly waiting continuations are: Bad Harry, Baby Harry, Fill Up Nice, Loser, Elevator, and Nursing school)
person sanda
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh please say there's gonna be another chapter!
person ulla
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Surprisingly naughty, which is weird because this is AFF. Not for the feint of heart. And since you asked I thought I should point out these spelling errors: humongous not humungous, dagged? you might've meant dabbed, banana not bananna, potatoes not potatos, squeezed not sqeezed. Okay. There are some grammatical errors, but nothing terrible. I am prone to dropping commas whenever, wherever I want. Not to mention run-on sentences.

Thanks for a great read. Is there more to the story? I hope there's another chapter or two in there. I'm smitten. Kudos.