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for Dance Floor Jealousy

by Firelady112

schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is brilliant. please do continue.... :( ..... hopefully happy?
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't see why you said you aren't good at writing D/hr stories, this one seems pretty good so far. I agree withyou on From Venice with Love, amazing story. Happy endings are good...but then again so are sad ones:D whichever way you take this story im down with it. Whats with this Jessica girl? why does she keep saying hings like Sweetie and Babe and stuff????????? I've never spoken to another girl like that, and no girl has ever spoken to me like that. We will say 'i love you' when we hang up, cuz you never know when your gunna see that person agai..but this jessica girl seems kinda extreme lol. Upppddaaatttee!!!!!!!!!
Shannon xoxox
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
That was good!
Yup, yup!
Especially loved the cliffy!
Yeah, wow!
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!!! I have to admit, I'm hooked. Update again soon please!
person Extraho
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
got a bit confused at the end there., when did jess talk to draco?
person Savvy20
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should definately continue this fiction. I loved it right down to the very end. Will she allow herself to see Draco? Because he seems like he wants to see her. Ah, fantastic story so far!!
person shelagh
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your first chapter. Keep going I want to see what you cone up with. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
happy ending...happy ending....!!!!

Please tell me Draco was trying to make himself ignore Hermione......as he gave his number.....

happy, lemony, ending......

oh, btw....can we get a happy ending pweeeeese?
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I like this, Please update soon.