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for Dance Floor Jealousy

by Firelady112

schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so tickled to see this updated.
I think you are doing wonderful.
Now will Blaise & Lavender happen to appear at the same restaurant?
Or will Hermione be mystery lady while Lavender is trying to find out who Hermione is seeing that night?
Will Draco consult his cousin about Hermione?
Waiting for more.
person Kilalla
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!

lol
I love the fact that Draco has a cell phone... lol I'm really excited about this story.
keep it up!
person luvhp
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods that was GREAT!!! I truly love this story and am very happy to see you are continuing it :0)

Hmm, messages from Mione to Draco...something naughty and Slytherin like would be good, hell if I can think right now, too worked up over their dreams. Please update soon!
person Kilalla
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love text messages lol like you dont even know.
so herers my idea

hey This is Hermione, you told my friend to give me your number? whats up?
or
Hi, this is hermione, what were you doing in a muggle club with a muggle cell phone??
or
Hey this is Hermione, want to get to gether to catch up?
or
Hey this is Hermione, Haven't heard anything about you in ages, how are you?

lol idk if you want her to be flurty os what not so i just put simple straight to the point texts. lol

I really like your story!
Update soon yes?
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good, can't wait till you update. PS.I like the happy ending, but do what you feels right for you xx
person Kilalla
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is really cute and your dream idea for the next chapter should be intersting too...I also think that you should end the story happy... lol

great start!
update soon yes?
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just let it go where it leads you. Sometimes stories will do that. Don't worry about the ending till you get there. I can't wait to read more
person shelagh
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK keep going. So far so good. ;)
person Sekhmet
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes.. I think you should continue, it could be awesome.. please?
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliffies and I love it so far so continue to write please. I don't care if it is happy or sad because both have the opportunity to be good.