rate_review Reviews

awesome i love it i love how very well its thought out with the guide lines of the book the whole star crossed lover is actually working in this peice yes smut please give us some smut

I'm loving this story. I like that you seem to be updating quickly keep up the great work!

jesus why a cliffhanger more please i didn't think lavender was overdone i think its important to know deeper plot lines to know how happy hermoine really is. thanks for the fluff stories its different and brave and i love the fact that you did it after the war its very refreshing i was wondering if i could make a suggestion, maybe you could have a really long chapter at dinner with hermoine and draco talking about the past and settling animosity and hate and lust i mean i love love love this story i just think if you added a bit more plot about the hate between them it would beef it up a bit either way i will keep reading and loving this story

I loved this story when I first read it and now you've added! I can't wait to see more!

so glad you carried on this story I have been waiting for an update 4 so long and then get 2 chappie's Excellent!! I love how Hermione and Draco are feeling about one another and I'm looking forward to the next update xx

Actually, I think the Lavender part is sweet and not overdone at all. Well, except the I'm-trying-to-emulate-you-and-Ron-likes-that thing. I like the clarification of the relationship between Hermione, Lavender, and Ron. I don't think I ever met a 25-year-old with wrinkles though.

you say you suck at dramione, one tip. try writing in third person instead of first.

i never read fic written in 1st person, on your next fic try writing in 3rd

It's nice to see a story where they're skittish but act reasonably straight-forward. No pouncing on each other, no insults, just a little uncertainty but determination. So Hermione's not speaking to Ron, but she's willing to make appointments with Lavender?

omg more i loved it!

OH MAN PLEASE KEEP WRITING I LOVE IT AND YOUR KILLING ME MAKING ME WAIT LIKE THIS! NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!