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by electricme

person Vittani
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was too good. particularly liked the picture taking, he he. Gorgeous shot and Narcissa would so do that. Update again soon.
person kcgx23
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 8! That pic sounds yummy!
person Bastian
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How can you be so cruel as to leave it off there? Update Update!!!! Soo good much have more....
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Draco is going to kill Ron if Harry doesn't stop him! Soooo need chapter 7!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this, but don't let Draco kill Ron. I actually like him in this fic. Keep up the GREAT work and update soon.
Kat
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to tell you in my last review that I am mad at you for making Harry the sub. I am just so tired of everyone making him a sub. Even as a demon/angel. You should have just let him beat the shit out of Mal. That would have been great, especially the look on Draco's face when he realized that he was not the dom. O'well, 'to each thier own'.
Kat
person NightLo
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...well...seemed Tristan's plan didn't work - is siren more sensitive? Or Harry's singing too horrible and attracted Draco's over? You know - with mates around, friendly-mate can no longer be 'friendly' - Ron better thought of new acts of friendship to protect his own life/body...

Thanks for that explanation, actually it is my habit of asking more, though I knew that will explain later...just hope that would not be a problem...
person coru
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story once again but the ending is just plain evil
person coru
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
also will you please inform me when the story is updated my email is sdb9844@yahoo.com