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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1--oh shit! Oh no! (I haven't even started reading it yet) and I'm already tearing up! hahahaha God. And I'm in a good mood too *whimper* lmao
First sentence: "losing" not "loosing" ("loose" is the opposite of tight, and "lose" is the opposite of win) Okay, on with the story!
*WHIMPER* No no no! Draco loves Harry = good! Harry has NOT abandoned him (right?) NO NO NO LEAVE MY DRACO ALONE!!!! PLEASE LEAVE HIM ALONE *sob*
I'll bet $10 that it was Bella who said "He was more fun when he screamed. Do something I'm bored" *snarl* bitch *flips Bella the bird* How do you like that, huh? Bitch.
"I've been abandoned. By both sides" Ohhhhhhh that made me cry! NO DRACO NO! HARRY HASN'T ABANDONED YOU!
and OH MY GOD the sensations! When Draco's talking about the senses, I just want to die! It's so...so...raw and accurate and just OH MY GOD
Okay, "Filthy Slytherin Slut"????? What happened? Okay, so Draco likes Harry...Harry wasn't sure about him...then likes him back...then thinks that Draco betrayed him (because he's a DE?) and so calls him a filthy Slytherin slut and leaves...and then Draco gets taken captive and tormented with lies that Harry won't come to save him?
Is that what happened???? BECAUSE HARRY HAS TO COME AND SAVE HIM!1 PLEASE?
Okay, okay *sobbing while typing* we can still save this. Draco just THINKS it was death, but it was really Harry saving him! Harry still loves him!!!! HARRY STILL LOVES HIM!!!!! Please????
Raindrops on roses
whiskers on kittens
When I'm feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
and then I don't feel so bad
Harry and Draco
shag-ging each other
(To the tune of "Favorite things" from The Sound of Music) See, we have to get to the shagging part!
But yet again, BRILLIANT WORK with the angst and the ripping of my poor heart! :D
First sentence: "losing" not "loosing" ("loose" is the opposite of tight, and "lose" is the opposite of win) Okay, on with the story!
*WHIMPER* No no no! Draco loves Harry = good! Harry has NOT abandoned him (right?) NO NO NO LEAVE MY DRACO ALONE!!!! PLEASE LEAVE HIM ALONE *sob*
I'll bet $10 that it was Bella who said "He was more fun when he screamed. Do something I'm bored" *snarl* bitch *flips Bella the bird* How do you like that, huh? Bitch.
"I've been abandoned. By both sides" Ohhhhhhh that made me cry! NO DRACO NO! HARRY HASN'T ABANDONED YOU!
and OH MY GOD the sensations! When Draco's talking about the senses, I just want to die! It's so...so...raw and accurate and just OH MY GOD
Okay, "Filthy Slytherin Slut"????? What happened? Okay, so Draco likes Harry...Harry wasn't sure about him...then likes him back...then thinks that Draco betrayed him (because he's a DE?) and so calls him a filthy Slytherin slut and leaves...and then Draco gets taken captive and tormented with lies that Harry won't come to save him?
Is that what happened???? BECAUSE HARRY HAS TO COME AND SAVE HIM!1 PLEASE?
Okay, okay *sobbing while typing* we can still save this. Draco just THINKS it was death, but it was really Harry saving him! Harry still loves him!!!! HARRY STILL LOVES HIM!!!!! Please????
Raindrops on roses
whiskers on kittens
When I'm feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
and then I don't feel so bad
Harry and Draco
shag-ging each other
(To the tune of "Favorite things" from The Sound of Music) See, we have to get to the shagging part!
But yet again, BRILLIANT WORK with the angst and the ripping of my poor heart! :D
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harsh story... Left me feeling numb... Don't know if I like it or don't... I like to make Draco suffer to... But... *shakes her head* Cruel way to go!
How could you, Harry... Bad Harry... Bad! Safe Draco... Then you'll be a good boy!
How could you, Harry... Bad Harry... Bad! Safe Draco... Then you'll be a good boy!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far!! Can't wait to see what happens next... LOL and I vote for a happy ending!
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such Emotion... I need to Harness your Power...
Mabee I can steal it... Looking in one of Draco's books should help...
Mabee I can steal it... Looking in one of Draco's books should help...
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*tears*
More please.
More please.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Was Harry there at the end? Or was death being nice?
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope to goodness you can add another chappie and make it a happy ending ;o;
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter, I really hope there's more. Stupid Harry, Poor Draco *runs off to find tissues*