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bella killed cissa didn't she? that BITCH!!!!!!! she's the one who did it then. or maybe it's voldie orders to tie up loose ends. i don't know but i still hate bella. *kisses*

That last time Draco and Harry had sex, it seemed kinda wrong. Like Draco's heart wasn't in it. I get the feeling Draco has gone severly evil or been put under a curse. I'm hoping it's the later. I don't want to believe Draco is evil. I would rather it be Dumbledore who was behind the whole thing and he did plant that dream, but I have this nagging gut feeling that i am rifht about Draco. My gut feelings about things are almost always right nine times out of ten, not just about stories though about real life too. Oh well. I really like this story. I had always thought Harry should have been put into Slytherin, and I can't wait to find out what happens. Hope you update soon.

Need chapter 29! Something tells me things just went south in their relationship.

In the last chapter, where they at the hospital when they were having sex ? I got a little confused there for a minute.

uh oh she's going insane RUN!!!!! kidding, sorry that i haven't reviewed in awhile but i've been busy. these chapters are great but there needs to be more. pwease update soon pwease oh pwease update soon *kisses*

gotta love make-up sex! LOL But then again, they say people have sex right after funerals, I wonder if it just applies to the funeral or the death in general? lol Hrm... I am interested to see what happens next!

Things are falling apart for the two. They've quit communicating! Soooo need chapter 28!

I think it worked, you had to get some detials out. Hope you get everything worked out with your life soon and update when you can :)

have faith in your own writing and never - never admit to your readers that you don't like something. It just sits you up for flames and perceived reality when it doens't exist. These are called "filler chapters" they exist to connect the action and plot into an understandable plot line. There is nothing wrong with them and they are a necessary part of telling a story, have faith - use the Force and trust your inner voice, not those of the masses. Oh was that "deep" or what? seriously, don't be too hard on yourself, just take some time and outline where you are going, it makes the trip so much easier.

Your being too hard on yourself, the chapter wasn't that bad. Plus, I was so looking forward to an update. Sorry to hear about your Dad and your ankle, hope everything gets better.

I think you should have Sirius write back to Harry, but Draco intercepts the letter and reads it before Harry gets it. Then they can get into a huge fight over the letter, then Harry tells Draco about his fears about being with him, then Draco forces himself on Harry sexually. What do you think? Either way, I look forward to the update.