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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this is probably one of my favourite fanfics to date. I previously began reading it on ff.net, but, after realizing that it was also on aff.net, I jumped on the chance to get more chapters. Is there a reason as to why this one has more chapters? Not that it truly matters anyway.
I love watching the relationship build stronger between Harry and Draco. Harry didn't jump into the relationship like many other stories I have read, and not only does it make me smile to seem him go down fighting (We- my perverted brain and I- can just pretend that didn't sound kinky) but it also gives more reality into your gripping tale (because I always wanted to say that).
I must say that love how stubborn Ginny is being (I never liked her- "It's for some stupid, noble reason, isn't it?") and how calm Draco was when reading her angry (a wee bit of an understatement) letter. You have seemed (in my opinion) to keep all the characters basically in character, and I do respect you for that.
Thank you for not having Draco break down with "YOU MUST LOVE ME, HARRY! I COMPLETE YOU! I'M A VEELA AND YOU ARE MY MATE!" I love veela!Draco stories, don't get me wrong, but it seems that whenever Draco becomes a veela nowadays, his Slytherin-ness (yes, that's a word) disappears along with the blonde hair, which transformed into a "shimmering mercury, matching his sparkling eyes, that reflected the moon and, in Harry's opinion, gave the pale boy an angelic look." Yeah, I know what you're thinking... I've read too many fanfics of the veela sort.
I truly hope that this will end well, and I have no doubt in my mind that, even if it doesn't end with a storybook ending, I will be pleased and sated, non-the-less.
Keep up the brilliant work, and I hope that you update soon~
I do believe that this is the longest review I have writen to date! Well... I'll stop rambling now...
I love watching the relationship build stronger between Harry and Draco. Harry didn't jump into the relationship like many other stories I have read, and not only does it make me smile to seem him go down fighting (We- my perverted brain and I- can just pretend that didn't sound kinky) but it also gives more reality into your gripping tale (because I always wanted to say that).
I must say that love how stubborn Ginny is being (I never liked her- "It's for some stupid, noble reason, isn't it?") and how calm Draco was when reading her angry (a wee bit of an understatement) letter. You have seemed (in my opinion) to keep all the characters basically in character, and I do respect you for that.
Thank you for not having Draco break down with "YOU MUST LOVE ME, HARRY! I COMPLETE YOU! I'M A VEELA AND YOU ARE MY MATE!" I love veela!Draco stories, don't get me wrong, but it seems that whenever Draco becomes a veela nowadays, his Slytherin-ness (yes, that's a word) disappears along with the blonde hair, which transformed into a "shimmering mercury, matching his sparkling eyes, that reflected the moon and, in Harry's opinion, gave the pale boy an angelic look." Yeah, I know what you're thinking... I've read too many fanfics of the veela sort.
I truly hope that this will end well, and I have no doubt in my mind that, even if it doesn't end with a storybook ending, I will be pleased and sated, non-the-less.
Keep up the brilliant work, and I hope that you update soon~
I do believe that this is the longest review I have writen to date! Well... I'll stop rambling now...
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd say Harry took a first-first, second-first, and a third-first step. That was lovely. I hope we have at least two more chapters to enjoy rather than one.
Well, I feel very satisfied. :D
Well, I feel very satisfied. :D
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is there more? #puppy eyes#
i really love this story and would be very sad to see it end... ever #chuckles#
i really love this story and would be very sad to see it end... ever #chuckles#
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES YES YES YES YES! BAHAHAHAHAH! Ginny's an idiot and Bill -who cares?? hahaha - and Ron and Hermione are hilarious and Rita Skeeter and wishing Harry and Draco well and Pansy and her absolutely awesome comments! AHH I'm just far too excited about all of this! And the MOVE! Harry ACTUALLY did it! OMG I'm SO HAPPY about that! I desperately want Draco to top because it's my favourite but I love how they still fight for dominance and how Draco's determined to make Harry melt the same way he did hahahah "just as soon as he wakes up" hahaha I love it! And yet I'm SO SAD that it's ending soon! SO SO SO SAD! GAH! I hate being torn between wanting more and never wanting it to end!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:)
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER. You can't end the story before Harry bottoms! PLEASE!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I like how Harry came to see that he liked sex with men, specifically Draco better. :) yay!!! I liked it, it was a great chapter. ;)
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
W00t! That was smexy hotness...and so emotionally charged to make the stoutest fangirl squeal. I'm glad the Weasley's got a dose of reality and returned to their reasonable and sensibly caring routine. That would have been just too unfair; to deny Harry of the only real family he's ever known.
Thank you, I think a fic - even the AU ones - are so much better the more the characters stay in character and are recognizable, or there's a damn good reason why they are out of character in the first place. Good on you.
Thank you, I think a fic - even the AU ones - are so much better the more the characters stay in character and are recognizable, or there's a damn good reason why they are out of character in the first place. Good on you.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha whoa!!! I love it! Hooray for Harry and being divorced from the psycho slut! :O I am glad that he and Draco now the freedom to explore their mutal affections and attraction. I am glad Draco has softened around the edges slightly as he was a true bastard at the beginning of the story. I love it either way, Draco only works well as a bastard, after all. :)
I can't wait to see what trouble you brew up next for us!!
I can't wait to see what trouble you brew up next for us!!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU. i trully do. ur writing is ingenious and the passion between Harry and Draco ignites my inner flame. i can't wait for Harry to initiate the sex with Draco. i am patiently and most excitedly waiting for that day.