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for Building With Worn-Out Tools

by Lomonaaeren

person anon
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
doesn't the letter from ginny violate the mouth-binding decree? after all judge witherbone said it applied to harry and his arguer at the end of the trial. will she be fined?
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I need chapter 32!!!
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is awsome! Probably one of the best I've read. Draco is smexy...
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
das good ^_^
i feel like a dirty pervert for saying this... but i sort of felt as though the story couldn't be over till they'd had sex once at the very least
person sak
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the contrast of Harry's trip to the Zabini residence and then Draco went shopping! Just tickled my funny bone. Thank you for these extra chapters. You could have ended it with the trial rather than having Draco and Harry interact with the Weasleys and the rest of the world. But this is nice and the conversation (well, gazing) with Narcissa was a lovely touch on this chapter.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so wonderful and exciting at the same time!!
person Dezra
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. I can't believe that Harry and Draco managed to compete while having sex. LOL Poor Draco, he's been bossing Harry around in a helpful way since the beginning, I'm glad that Harry won this round, though it looked like a win/win. Sorry to see this story ending.
person Jan
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
B E A utiful!

Please update soon ^_^
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it so much!!!! great job
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Is there going to be any sequels after this one??