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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has definatly held my interest through two chapters and I am glad for that!!! I am looking forward to this soo much! I love law and things of that nature so it is interesting to see how you spin it to make it fit in your world :)
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3! I sooo hope Ginny comes out the loser in this. With none of the Potter money. After all she has the Zabini fortune at her greedy little hands now.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the concept for this story...can't wait for the next chapter to come out. :)
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You definitely have me intrigued with this setup. The interaction between Draco and Harry was fascinating. Learning how Harry had lost control of his magic was unexpected--a curse, huh? Still Draco's reaction to his magic was interesting. I look forward to reading more.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE Love love it. Keep going. I want to know what happens next!
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I'm getting all excited just by READING Harry's magic, lol I can imagine how Draco must feel next to him! DAHAH good ^^ and I love the parseltongue with the snakes! This is really exciting, just the way it's written! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It has my favorite pairing, bashing of Ginny and a great story line. Now if you could manage to bash Hermione somehow I would vote it for any award out there. I also love how you have written Draco and Harry. Good stuff. I look forward to more.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, unquestionably better than revising. I would be infuriated by the fact that Ginny cheated on Harry, but I think her and Blaise make an adorable couple. ^^
I'm pleased Draco isn't some meagre ex-Death Eater, trying to make something of himself and failing miserably. I don't particularly like fics like that. I just hope his services won't be too expensive. ^_^
Please update soon.
I'm pleased Draco isn't some meagre ex-Death Eater, trying to make something of himself and failing miserably. I don't particularly like fics like that. I just hope his services won't be too expensive. ^_^
Please update soon.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! As if it was Harry's fault the baby died... if its not nature's decision its the mother's fault. I lost two myself. I agree with him though. If she was that unhappy she should have left him then took up with Blaise. Not the other way around. Can't wait for chapter 2!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... I liked it. I really, really liked it.
And I must say, I don't agree with Ginny's actions and words. Actually, I dislike her very much, and wanted to punch her in the her foul mouth in some part of their argument.
First of all, if she had married to Harry, she must know him pretty well, which meant she MUST know, how he hate his fame. She MUST know that he DON"T want be famous, he DON'T want to do something, "worth mentioning", constantly, on regular basis. She MUST assume, that if he "fly for fun", he must know if he is strong enough to endure the professional sport's requirements. I agree with Harry, that if she was unhappy with him, she MUST talk about it with him, not go behind his back and cheat on him. And her phrase about him, not able to give her "a baby that would live" was a totally low blow. I wanted to kick her for this - does she really think so? Does she really DON'T understand how much Harry wants family of his own? Does she really don't understand, how much it pains him, that their baby wasn't born? I don't think so. I think she wanted to give Harry more pain, and just did it without caring about anything. Poor Harry. Ginny is a bitch. Ginny must die. Or at least, be suffering a lot. :(
And finally, I'm concerned about Malfoy and his intentions towards Harry. After all, you write that he wants make "Potter pay, in more, than one sense" and that Hedwig "should mistrust him". I'm worried about Harry now even more. I frankly hope that by pairing "Draco/Harry" you didn't intended to make Harry submissive partner in their future couple, because I don't trust Draco to not hurt Harry. I hope Harry will have the lead in their relationships, and that he will control in this, because I don't think I can ever trust with such thing to Malfoy.
And I must say, I don't agree with Ginny's actions and words. Actually, I dislike her very much, and wanted to punch her in the her foul mouth in some part of their argument.
First of all, if she had married to Harry, she must know him pretty well, which meant she MUST know, how he hate his fame. She MUST know that he DON"T want be famous, he DON'T want to do something, "worth mentioning", constantly, on regular basis. She MUST assume, that if he "fly for fun", he must know if he is strong enough to endure the professional sport's requirements. I agree with Harry, that if she was unhappy with him, she MUST talk about it with him, not go behind his back and cheat on him. And her phrase about him, not able to give her "a baby that would live" was a totally low blow. I wanted to kick her for this - does she really think so? Does she really DON'T understand how much Harry wants family of his own? Does she really don't understand, how much it pains him, that their baby wasn't born? I don't think so. I think she wanted to give Harry more pain, and just did it without caring about anything. Poor Harry. Ginny is a bitch. Ginny must die. Or at least, be suffering a lot. :(
And finally, I'm concerned about Malfoy and his intentions towards Harry. After all, you write that he wants make "Potter pay, in more, than one sense" and that Hedwig "should mistrust him". I'm worried about Harry now even more. I frankly hope that by pairing "Draco/Harry" you didn't intended to make Harry submissive partner in their future couple, because I don't trust Draco to not hurt Harry. I hope Harry will have the lead in their relationships, and that he will control in this, because I don't think I can ever trust with such thing to Malfoy.