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for Building With Worn-Out Tools

by Lomonaaeren

person EG
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is delicious!
person Dezra
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOO please don't let this become a discontinued WIP. Great start so far. I love the tension and Harry's uncontrolled magic. I hope Ginny and Blaise goes down in flames, though I feel bad about the baby being born to them.
person js
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. It's very entertaining.
person WeasleyWench
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is bloody brilliant! I haven't read any stories where it discussed Draco taking care of his tortured mother, this is great! I am looking forward to more, this is so wonderful!!!! I hope you update soon.
person Danine
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful! I can't wait to read the next installment!
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 4! How dare Ginny ask that of Harry! I hope she loses and loses big! After all she came into that marriage as a gold-digging tramp and she should only be allowed to leave with her things. And Harry should decide if she gets to keep anything he's ever given her! That's my hope!
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I cant wait for things to heat up between
Draco and Harry.
Thank you.
person Bagel
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's nicely written, with little to no grammar errors. The page is slightly spacy, but organized and easy to read. It's an interesting plot and I would like to continue reading.
person rafiq
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was looking forward to a just good divorce fight between Harry and the bitch, but the plot thickens. And I love it.
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I LOVE Draco. That, right there, is EVERYTHING that I love about him, in one chapter. Everything. I love it. I cannot WAIT for the next chapter. Seriously. I can't. I'm so impatient with things, it's like a DRUG! hahah I love the way you write this, I don't think law of any kind has ever seemed so fascinating to me! heheh