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by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh meo deos ... Wow I must say I felt in love with this story :)

The plot is interesting and for such a H/D fan as myself, this portrait of Ginny is one I have never saw before and I love it!

I must say that your twisting of actual fact about 'muggle' wedding into a wizard wedding is also quite nice.
Good Job, could I be on alert too?
person Dezra
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story just keeps getting better and better.
person Star55
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am positively salivating over this chapter (It could possibly be the starburst lollies that i have just finished, but I'm sure that it is your fic!!)

This was brilliant!! I am soo soo glad that Harry is seeing Ginny for the skanky bitch that she is!! I hate her so badly, and I am soooo glad that you are portraying her as the stupid bint that she is ;-)

Love your work!! I also LOVE "A Year's Temptation" and I am hoping that in that one, Harry will realise that Draco is all the he needs, and vise versa =)

Can't wait for the next installments of both of your amazing fics!!

<333 ~*Star*~
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply Marvellous! I can't wait to see what kind of a sham of an arguement Blaise puts up next. Is there a rebuttal portion?
person KCRae
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fantastic! I am absolutely loving the story! I love the character development as well as your point of view on ginny's feelings towards Harry. It is exactly the way I think she sees things, loving Harry the hero instead of Harry the man. Marvelous. I can't wait for the update, thankfully you work quicker then me! :)
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
1. i fuckin' love this chapter... massive amounts of brilliance
2. why so much work?!
3. i hope you're not stressing yourself out
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god !
that chapter was so good!
i wish i could write as well as you can!
makes me really hate ginny too
xxxx
person beautifullove348
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Excellent!! Plain Excellent! That was superb writing skills right there!! Gods I so admire you right now!! That was soo realistic I could actually imagine myself in that courtroom. Draco's performance was absolutely perfect! Couldnt have written it better myself! I give major compliments and cudos to you and please keep up the outstanding work and update soon! I look forward to it with avid waiting!!!:)
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Draco's words blew me away! Sooo captured the truth! I sooo can't wait for chapter 9!
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha "the grinning git shell" (among many other things) made me laugh so hard! I love Draco and Harry and their dynamic here! Everything and Draco as an Arguer honestly has got to be irresistible to see O_O I cannot get over it, I hang onto every word of this story! I cannot wait for more!