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by Lomonaaeren

person Dezra
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
absolutely fabulous. I love how Harry appears to be in more control of himself than Draco. I'd like to have a moment of happiness for Ginny screwing up in the courtroom. hehehe Great chapter.

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person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting good....where the hell does Ginny get the gonads?.....Oh and Lucius I can't wait to see what happens with that my only request is MAKE HIM SUFFER...and I think you should positively devastate the twins...anyway update soon
person acr1228
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thoroughly enjoying this fic!
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter
do you know how long the whole thing will be ?
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person KCRae
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! I adore the not immediate action on the attraction, so far as harry is concerned. Also i like the way draco admitted he liked harry to fight him at the end. i think it was very in character, he always loved to fight harry and that not just going to go away! can't wait to see more and may i get email updates?? thanks!
person graballz
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11--Let me just say that I LOVE it when you get the urge to share a chapter!!! *sending good vibes to have urges more often* I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! *squeal*

Potter owes Malfoy a debt?? Because of the whole "permission to be angry" thing? Because Harry's obviously paying Draco to be his Arguer (so no debt there) but if it's the anger thing...I can think of a way for him to work off the debt! *naughty giggle*

EEK! Harry's gonna get mad???? *hope hope hope* Is that going to lead to hot, angry, violent sex? (Please???) There are few things hotter in this world than Harry and Draco having violent angry sex....and all of the hotter things involve Harry, Draco, and SOME kind of sex!

LMAO GODDAMN I love it when Harry is the oblivious Gryffindor!!!!! "Available to gay men"....because Harry's magic "attracted and confused" Draco....*placating tone* yeah, sure...okay, Harry...believe what you want...*mutter* bloody Gryffindor.

Ooooo, Harry's getting smarter! About some things, that is...I guess we'll have to wait until the trial is over for Draco to hit Harry in the head and kiss him again for him to get it through his little Gryffindor brain...and won't THAT be a sweet, sweet day!

EEEEEEEE Okay, so maybe not QUITE angry, violent sex...but Harry threw a wine glass at him, and I'm guessing they're both aroused! SO HOT!!! NEED NEXT CHAPTER!!! *c'mon get an urge to share!* haha No, really, this chapter was SO great! I loved it! And Harry's speech was really good!
person Jan
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I really like this story. I can't wait till your next update. Poor Harry having to go through such a hard time. And the Weasley's are a great disappointment, to think that Ginny has a right to have anything from Harry, just because she went to a semi poor man that got her pregnant (the nerve) Love the fact that Harry is fighting them all. Please update soon ^__^
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are a god of some kind O_O This chapter nearly killed me! I got shivers down my back at the same moment you wrote Draco did at Harry's words. The way you write it... you can just FEEL the power of Harry's magic and all of the fantastic and dazzling sensations that his power gives off... I'm so drawn in every time that Harry and Draco have a war of words... or that Harry speaks the way he does... and I fall head over heels for Draco when he argues, it's bloody fantastic!
person 777
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Draco said that what he was attracted to was Harry's *power*? Then, Harry's kinda right in his assumptions about him, isn't he? Draco doesn't really know him well enough yet to like him for real. What about Harry, though? He's impressed by Draco's ability, and what?
But it seems the phase now is to get over just the raw attraction and build feelings, no? Of course, there's still Ginny in the way, and Harry's fighting it...
I'm loving it(also impressed that you can write so fast! My own stories take ages to be updated ;P. It's great, you must really like doing it!).
person beth2438
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome. I love it. I can't wait to see more.