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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha nice, I love it! Harry is so fucked by his own decision, LOL
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 16! They need to be careful! If Ginny and Blaise find out.... they just can't! That.... woman and her prat deserve nothing!!!!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA! Harry's so clueless! There are no words to describe how much I adore Draco and how you've written him! NO WORDS! Just too bloody fantastic! And Harry! Gah so innocent sometimes and oblivious, even when he's not innocent at all X_X I love it! I cannoooot wait for more of this! You always keep me on the edge of my seat!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm really loving this fic. it's well written and have a good plot... your writing rhythm isn't bad either as far as the story goes, i just hope you can keep the fire burning and not fall short in the end, i've had experienced those in the past fics i have read... could you please, Please, PLEASE! add me to your alert list? it would be very much appreciated..
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gawd, Harry is dense! And in some frickin deep denial there!
Totally approve of Draco's technique to show him the light, though ;D.
Totally approve of Draco's technique to show him the light, though ;D.
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its been a long time since I've read a fic this freaking awesome! I had to read this in one sitting, and let me tell you, it was worth it! I'm not sure when your next update on this story is, but I am definitely waiting eagerly for it! wonderful job, can't wait for more!
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has to be, without a doubt, one of the best HP post-war fictions on the net, and believe me, I have scoured countless sites for writers like you. You somehow bring the characters to life, and flesh them out in a way that is so wholly believable. I have fallen in love with your Draco, a Draco that is not simpering, overtly arrogant and unreasonably malicious. Yes, your Draco has all three characteristics, but you blend them in such a way that each play on the other traits, and seduces the readers with the melange.
And Harry.... You have managed to make me like him! Yes, I know you must be cocking your head right now. Who reads Harry Potter fanfiction if they dislike HArry Potter? Simple enough: I read it because of authors like you. Some where in the muddy pool of helpless, victimized heros and arrogant, clueless idiots, I find a gem. Oh, I like those personalities in many of the HArrys I like, but many authors do not know when to stop.
With this story, I have no idea what will happen, something that is so fascinating and irritating. Fascinating because this is one of the few fics that avoids cliches, and when there are any, you manipulate them so you undermine the whole ideas of cliches, or/and use it to strengthen your story. Irritating because I have no way to brace myself for what will happen. I was on the edge of my seat during Rebuttal. The dialogue was deliciously witty.
Herm and Ron, I actually have no idea what will happen. I do hope they remain HArry's friends... he has lost so much already.
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And I am rambling...
Please excuse the long-winded spiel.
Anyways, whatever you're doing, don't stop! It's incredibly addicting, your story.
One thing I would enjoy seeing would be to see Draco unravel a bit, let his defenses down, in front of HArry. Perhaps a bit of jealousy too, on HArry's part. It seems that Draco is doing all the chasing (which he is), but I would love to see HArry react with possessiveness, but when Draco isn't deliberately setting the situation up. It'd be so sweet to see Draco cut off guard by someone that tries to court him.
Argh! Enough with my rambling! I've written a mini story up there!
Please email me when you update.
And Harry.... You have managed to make me like him! Yes, I know you must be cocking your head right now. Who reads Harry Potter fanfiction if they dislike HArry Potter? Simple enough: I read it because of authors like you. Some where in the muddy pool of helpless, victimized heros and arrogant, clueless idiots, I find a gem. Oh, I like those personalities in many of the HArrys I like, but many authors do not know when to stop.
With this story, I have no idea what will happen, something that is so fascinating and irritating. Fascinating because this is one of the few fics that avoids cliches, and when there are any, you manipulate them so you undermine the whole ideas of cliches, or/and use it to strengthen your story. Irritating because I have no way to brace myself for what will happen. I was on the edge of my seat during Rebuttal. The dialogue was deliciously witty.
Herm and Ron, I actually have no idea what will happen. I do hope they remain HArry's friends... he has lost so much already.
...
And I am rambling...
Please excuse the long-winded spiel.
Anyways, whatever you're doing, don't stop! It's incredibly addicting, your story.
One thing I would enjoy seeing would be to see Draco unravel a bit, let his defenses down, in front of HArry. Perhaps a bit of jealousy too, on HArry's part. It seems that Draco is doing all the chasing (which he is), but I would love to see HArry react with possessiveness, but when Draco isn't deliberately setting the situation up. It'd be so sweet to see Draco cut off guard by someone that tries to court him.
Argh! Enough with my rambling! I've written a mini story up there!
Please email me when you update.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG but that boy is thick! Please tell me that he gets it soon...still love it even though I'm with Draco, Harry is irritating...update soon.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Please update again soon.