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Oh I just love how you string everything along :D It's so fantastic! Harry's attempt to word his way to get what he wants and Draco's smug little chuckles and everything about the two of them interacting! You can tell they've both grown up but are somehow still exactly the same... personalities are perfect, just maturity is involved haha I dunno if that makes sense but you are brilliant and I cannot wait for more!

Well I am glad the "sex" thing is on hold for now. Harry's mistrust and disrespect for it coupled with Draco's mishandling was making me uncomfortable, too. I don't think I realized Draco saw Harry as someone who needed or wanted to be dominated...I am glad he got over himself in that regard and saw Harry's real want--to be an equal.

The claim was a good choice, too. It will say more about Harry's opinion of Ginny than the money one would. And it ensures peace of mind and ears and will add to her frustration which other's will see if she tries to go around it and which will only make her more embarrassed. muwahahaha.

Draco does seem far too smug, but I suppose as the pursuer he needs something to keep his hope and determination fueled.

Sooo need chapter 19! Poor Harry! He thinks he's won.

Well I certainly hope they stop the "sex" for now as it really does just seem to be a disaster. Draco was pushing to hard to fast and Harry is a mess. Yes, Harry doesn't understand that Draco is trying or is sincere about his feelings, but forcing base and physical action isn't going to make that clearer. Consideration and thoughtfulness will go a lot farther.

So let's get back to laying waste of the Weaslette and Blaise in court and in as many social circles as possible and far away from this mockery of a decent relationship.

Though Pansy still bugs me we all knew she was more right than wrong. But can Draco get over himself and crush to put important things first and at the same time maintain is suffering dignity and reputation?

well, they'll go in there and argue about different things: one to apologise and to convince the other that he should go somewhere alone, the other about the state of their relationship... and I'm not sure if Harry has even done any thinking about their relationship at all and he'll want to leave for the Burrow soon... that will go well.

but which claim will they ask for? it keeps bugging me! last I checked it was 'business before pleasure' so I do agree with Harry that they should get it out of the way soon. I'd go mad if it wasn't all in order and was constantly on my mind (or I'd dive into fanfiction...).

last I checked doing something like Pansy did was illegal and there is lots of evidence against her. entertaining it may be but she will be in trouble now won't she?
hope for more soon!

I soooo need chapter 18! Harry can't go to the Burrow. It could be a trap. I don't care what anyone says. Those Weasleys stick together. No! Don't go! Hope Draco gets his way! Go Pansy!

Not sure what Pansy has planned but I'm quit happy that she's going to help Draco. Especially now that he's decide what he wants. I hope this gay thing won't hurt them in the trial.

Another wonderful chapter :) I look forward to the outcome of this little battle of wits between Harry and Draco and the meeting with Ron. :)

AH! I needed to scream. Haha. Ahh you torment me soooooo! They are both on a very different page there hahaha and I'm glad that Ron wants to keep his friendship with Harry. I think I'd want to kill him if he had blown him off. I would. And I absolutely adore how you've continued to tug at the relationship between Harry and Draco, so uncertain and neither of them are thinking the same thing. I hope it all turns out! Pansy's plan was absolute madness hahaha I think I like her. And I have to say I love Narcissa too for no apparent reason, but when she's insane, she's awesome. I love it when Draco argues too... ah just too much love for words! I can't wait for the next part!

Draco kept trying to convince Pansy that all it was, was play... if there were no feelings there he'd have focused more on the being under influence of magic and if it's a smart thing to do I think... by denying that part she figured out there were feelings involved and she stepped out? am I right?
usually I like smut scenes but in this story I like the story so much I'd rather have plot... is that wrong :-P no offence to your smut-writing skills intended, I do like it. I just like the story even more. can't wait to see what Draco has planned now! and you say another courtroom scene will be soon? I hope so...
hope for more soon!