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for Building With Worn-Out Tools

by Lomonaaeren

schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, she is a bitch!
If she was really sorry, and didn't want that anything bad happen, then she will convice Zabini of it, or tell Harry that she was going to leave him or...something like that! But she first goes and ask for money, and then threat him!
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there.
I'm surprised with the amount of HP's fics you have writen! I mean...wow!
So i started this one....my conclusions on chapter 1: ginny is a bitch and draco is a bad, bad boy....althrough i couldn't stopp laughing myself....XD
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohohohoho! Sexy magic! I never though of that!
Poor Harry, he sounds really bad...so...tired.
Let's see what happens when the trial starts.
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
For a moment i really believe that Blaise was going to be a fair oponent to Draco but...i guess not...
Of caohrse,that doesn't mdan that when they start the trial againg, he won't be better....with a better strategy...lets se what happens next!
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I wish Harry had read the complete article!
I wanted to laugh with Rita's ideas...i always belive she is funny
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"But not in a gay way"... JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJJAJJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJAUJAJJJAJJAJAJAJJAJAAJJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJA!!!!
person Silverkitten
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just got to finish reading this whole story at once. You are an incredible writer, and this is easily the best fanfiction I have ever read. You have a superhuman ability to keep characters both in character while acknowledging change and growth. It was so believable. If you ever write a sequal send me an e-mail and I am all over it! Great job!
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It took me several days to read this story. But I can assure you that when I was not reading it, I was wishing I was. I absolutely love this. The story was both engaging and satisfying, and I love how you personified everyone in it. This is definitely a new favorite of mine. Well done.
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just got to the end of a chapter and I realised that I hadn't once bothered to review this amazing story. *Slap Eowyn!* Bad Eowyn for not giving the author due credit and royalties in words!!! This story is spell binding! I admit the plot and the characters are definately out of kilter with the real Harry Potter and indeed with the usual character traits but it WORKS!!! I love the idea that Harry is enduring divorce! I hate that Ginny's such a bitch! But in an oh my God I have to read more way! Anyway just to let you know I'm making my way through all of you're stories as I know you're a good writer and you had me trapped in your net the moment I finished the first chapter of Nova Cupid(and I'll stop there as I forget the exact spelling!)So yeah CHEERS!!! X x

*Eowyns elixure
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just got to the end of a chapter and I realised that I hadn't once bothered to review this amazing story. *Slap Eowyn!* Bad Eowyn for not giving the author due credit and royalties in words!!! This story is spell binding! I admit the plot and the characters are definately out of kilter with the real Harry Potter and indeed with the usual character traits but it WORKS!!! I love the idea that Harry is enduring divorce! I hate that Ginny's such a bitch! But in an oh my God I have to read more way! Anyway just to let you know I'm making my way through all of you're stories as I know you're a good writer and you had me trapped in your net the moment I finished the first chapter of Nova Cupid(and I'll stop there as I forget the exact spelling!)So yeah CHEERS!!! X x

*Eowyns elixure