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I do feel for the unborn child's "by word of mouth 'supposed' situation". But frankly the unborn child's condition is only hearsay and has yet to be confirmed by Harry so it is not certain that it really exists.

Regardless, even if the unborn child (I can't call it Lily, yet, reasons for later)has a condition that is confirmed the child's medical bills and lifestyle are the concern of that child's parents and family. Ginny has family. Blaise has family. Ginny's brothers are not broke. Ginny's parents aren't feeding the mouths of 7 children any longer or clothing them or paying for their education and books any longer. Her parents are too, not broke. She has friends who like her. She should be asking them to fund her bastard child's health expenses. Not the husband, to who(m) she broke all her wedding vows, some laws, and even the foundations of decency with.

I don't even think Ginny deserves any money from any vaults and the same goes for her bun in the oven. If somewhere along the line Harry wants to donate some money to the care of Ron's niece or nephew (if the sex of the baby has only been confirmed by Ginny then it has yet to be truly confirmed as it could be a lie) out of the goodness of his heart then that exchange of funds and gratitude should be done well away from any court room and legal binding agreements. Such good-will money should not become apart of an undeserved and ill-gained pot of gold.

And the name! The audaciousness is disgusting. Still it has truly yet to be confirmed that the child's name is definitely Lily. That could very well be a middle name or a 3rd middle name and conveniently used to egg Harry into agreeing to craziness. Nevertheless it is like trying to make Harry feel close or related to their affair and the proof there of like some sort of bloody hand print on a crime scene. disgusting.

And the threats! It was a true slap in the face even after all her pleading. I hope Draco goes ballistic on those two...no mercy. I'm not talking murder. There are worse things than a knife to the chest.

I was surprised and as equally pleased as Draco when Harry said he trusted him, though. Aww ww. And again when Draco basked in Harry's praise for a brief flickering moment. And Harry doesn't get....yet. **squeals with glee on the inside**

This was a great chapter. It was full of surprises and was definitely tense, highly anticipated, engaging word by word. I love it when I find a fic that I could easily read again and again and again and again...It is great.

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Very lovely characterization going on. Love the plot. Can't wait to see what develops. <3

Oh Blaise is a son of a bitch!!! That is so fucking foul that they would stoop so low as to take Narcissa... unless... Lucius took her, but even at Blaise's bidding promising fortunes, etc! Wow. Damn this is getting intense! I'd be pissed, LOL.

I am eager to see Draco's reactions to his mother's abduction and Ginny's notes. Please update soon

I'm glad that Ron decided to stand beside his friend, despite his bloody sister. Harry could use some outside help with Draco .

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Great chapter! I think Draco is so cute. He is realizing so many things about himself and Harry. Draco wants to be acknowlegdged by Harry. That is one idea that he has pushed from the beginning of this fic and even as far back to their 11 year old selves. I am glad to hear Draco admitting to it and to me it makes him all the more adorable. I just wish Harry would see that adorableness.

I really liked this chapter. I liked how Draco was reacting to the Ron and Harry conversation and even while being his elite Malfoy of the Manor self he was all so much more accessible. If that makes any sense.

I haven't given much thought about how much Ginny "needed" someone and Harry just wasn't there for her. Mostly cause I don't buy that to the extent that what she did was even remotely understandable. But I thought it cool that Harry got all fire-y stating his pretty solid thoughts on the matter. Ginny doesn't an apology-yeah.
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Enjoying it with tramedous amounts of love, Darling.
I squeal like a little school girl when I read your story [I'm a very proud person so the fact that I'm admitting this is quite ... remarkable]. You, in turn, should be very proud of yourself and your writing abilities ... wow... I sound really stuck up.... well maybe I am... just a little... ^_^

Yeah I like the story, I really do it's just I'm scared if I keep reading I'll find out something I don't want to know. That Draco is top. So can you tell me if it's likely to end up that way, just for my sanity.

Fantastic chapter! Soooo need chapter 20!

I adore you!!! This plot is different enough that I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the way you've developed Harry and Draco's adult personas. They're quite believable. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what Malfoy has up his sleeve for Harry.

oooh, i like how Harry is slowly coming around :) This is a lot of fun. Can't wait to see what happens in the court room.