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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh goodness is this the end? I hope its not the end, not that it isn't an entirely good end if it is, but I just hate endings and...i'm rambling. Sorry. Hope there is more and woohoo for Draco! HE DID IT! My, Harry is a bit damaged isn't he, no matter. Draco is a Slytherin, he can take it. yay!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes. Yes that was MUCH better than just killing him. This is why I love Draco so. And you. I love you so for writing this and everything. So much. I love it. I'm still all tingly hoping that Harry will wake up soon and things will be alright. I wonder how much more you have in store and I have this rather foolish hope that this story will go on forever but I know you have to end it eventually. I just hope there is still much more before that time comes! So wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 26! Love the revenge.
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I thought that Blaise' punishment was very fitting...I'm wondering what is going to happen to dear Ginny...I'd hate to see her lose the baby, but she really doesn't deserve to be a mother. Thanks for adding me to your update list! KLS
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that Harry is more honest about his feelings when he wakes up because I have a hunch that Draco might just throw him a curve ball! :) Yeah, Lucius bites the dust! Well good job, see you next time!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this is a very well written slash fic. I am usually not a fan of slash as the fics tend to be unrealistic, but this one has woven an intricate plot where the characters seem believable.
Now I wonder what will happen to Ginny? Will she see remorse for her ways?
Please, don't let Harry die...or be terribly incurable for ages!
Now I wonder what will happen to Ginny? Will she see remorse for her ways?
Please, don't let Harry die...or be terribly incurable for ages!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter inside Draco's head. He has such an intriguing duality going on-- his cruelty to Blaise vs. his compassion for Harry. Harry going to be so stuck with Draco! hehe
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Draco's spell ideas! LOL They are so cruel yet justified in that same way that advanced thought and morality is blurry. If one reason is sufficient - there is an explaination for the morally ambigious actions - but in their own way, no matter how corrupt, are neccessary. I love it! :) It is rich and the chracters have their flaws and the taming of Harry will be all the more sweet when he wakes!! haha It's brilliant I say!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....am I the only one who's feeling a bit sorry for Blaise? he did whatever he could do to win the case (not to say I agree with it since I hate what he did) and in return lost the case, finds out his wife, future-mother of his child, is scared of him, and will have to suffer under his worst fear (and possibly without several limbs) for the rest of his life which will end when Draco's does... as Blaise said: cruel...
yes, I hate him for what he did to Draco, Narcissa and Harry but... but in a system where they lock people up with dementors... I suppose this might actually be a minor sentence in comparison...
I hope Harry will be okay and not have more injuries that bother him (like his leg)... and Narcissa hasn't received any more damage (other than small physical damage)?
can't wait for the conclusion of the trial... and for Draco to make his move on Harry :-P
hope for more soon!
yes, I hate him for what he did to Draco, Narcissa and Harry but... but in a system where they lock people up with dementors... I suppose this might actually be a minor sentence in comparison...
I hope Harry will be okay and not have more injuries that bother him (like his leg)... and Narcissa hasn't received any more damage (other than small physical damage)?
can't wait for the conclusion of the trial... and for Draco to make his move on Harry :-P
hope for more soon!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad I found your fanfiction. I have really been enjoying your HP/DM stories and I am all caught up with them. I am especially happy that you update quickly. It can be so frustrating to find a good writer with an interesting story who only updates like once a month. Granted I am pathetically lazy but it is so nice that you aren't!