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for Building With Worn-Out Tools

by Lomonaaeren

person Dezra
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand why Bill is so stuck on them talking, it doesn't make sense or why they think it's Harry's fault. I wish it would end already because these small cliff-hangers are killing me. When is Ginny going to get her butt kicked?
person mm mm good
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was sweet. Mrs. Zabini's understanding or comprehension of those 3 curses and the stupidity her son had undertaken was a nice reprieve. A Slytherin's POV who actually knew how to be one without getting caught. I wonder where Blaise missed these lessons and started taking things for granted.

When I saw the chapter title I did stop to ponder various possible meanings of the meaning: argument about the case or about the curses or from the Weasly family or surprisingly from Blaise and Ginny. Glad to find Draco's curses was not behind the meaning. His honest forthcoming about the curses, reasons, and qualities of his personally was welcome. He laid it plain but not with out admriable appeal was not the meaning.

Draco argued beautifully. Everything he said was true even if not necessarily discussed for use in court. Ginny's absolute ruin in court was equally as beautiful more so because she was finally convinced of it. She has to face her harsh reality and bed of thorns which she laid herself, just like Blaise.

I can't wait to read the Weasly family confrontation. I am doubting it will be outrageously volital mostly because they (Well at least the Weasly men) seem to have grasped the situation. Besides, it is no surprise that as family they would be willing if not even eager to offer support to Ginny and the baby. It is one of those things that close families do. They step up. But such support is not without benefit. They may have more control on how the child is raised and knowing the character of the baby's parents that is a relief.

Of course, some anger and exchange of choice words between some can only be hoped for. I wonder if Ginny will be present at that.

This fan fiction was been a blast to read. Excellently laid out, argued through and with high healthy dose of romance. I just love the romance, especially the little details of blushes, facial expressions, the attempts at Draco restraining physical evidence of glee (partly because of the knowledge that eventually he could very well go without keeping up that appearance), how Harry's feelings for Draco gradually bubble to the surface in creative ways like irrepressible daydreams, etc...Love it all. Draco has been good for Harry. Yeah. (but having just said that thought I wonder if it can be said the other way around?) Besides the obvious, being loved and being in love is always a good thing line.

I just say, yeah, it has been good for Draco, too. If nothing else he did get over his I need to DOM campaign.

:D Lov'in it.
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!!

Will they now have a session of hot love making? Please? Pretty Please? ^____________________^
person The Shadow Bandit
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean that Harry is divorced? Great story BTW. Thanks for sharing.
person misslala
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK!!! One big hurdle crossed! :) That was great! They aren't officially divorced yet though - are they? She made no mention of that! o still, no sex! No No Draco, you did good, but it's not over yet!!! haha I love how Witherborne just said - she gets squat!!! I can't wait to see what happens next, will Harry and Draco have a small start or will it be overwhelming! A whirlwind of emotional fire?
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YES! BAHAHAHAHA DRACO WON! Not that I doubted him, of course, but it's actually PRINTED NOW! BAHAHAHAHAH! VICOTRY!!!!!! And now Harry and Draco can move on and be together and gah I'm so excited! But I'm also rather sad that it is likely going to end relatively soon.... always torn when it comes to wonderful stories like this one! Yet still, MUST HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER!
person KCRae
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D thats all i have. A huge, wide, delighted smile!
person Away file
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, been away for awhile. Okay, where to start. I enjoyed that battle. Harry and Lucius really put a hurting on each other. I had to read Lucius
person ketchup
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I suppose I
person Jan
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally they are on a honest and truthful relationship. Non of that nonsense of who dominated who, or Harry denying his true feelings.

And what audacities Ginny have to keep demanding of money after all she's done?
Can't wait to see what's coming to her. Please update soon. ^_^