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for More Than Expected ....And Then Some

by Markus7

schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's been a while since you updated this fic, but i really hope you'll continue it soon ^^ you'll probably use the regular pairings with the gw boys, yet still i'm hoping you'll put quatre with heero (they remind me a bit of draco and harry ^^)

it sounds interesting and i wonder what'll happen next!!! ^^
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice Will
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who are the boys? What do they have to do with the defense? Can't wait for chapter 3!
person AndreaH
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Absolutely positive!! Go on! I am really impatient to know what exactly happened. And please see to it that Draco does not get kissed - at least not by the Dementors, but rather by Harry!
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why was Lucius begging? He had them all tied up! Can't wait for chapter 1!
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to learn why Lucius would escape only to beg to be taken back. Could you please change trail to trial though? Pretty please? Thanks for sharing. Pitt
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You might want to invest in a beta. In this small prologue alone you have made many mistakes. I'm not quite sure what your story about even with the sort of summary. You might want to clear all that up. Good luck and Good writing!
person hpfan
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! dats a really cool start! plz keep going.