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by princesspeach

person Bella
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sticking with you! Please finish the story in story format. :)
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I for one would rather have a summary of what happens. Best of luck with screenwriting!
person Jess
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should definitely stick it out and wait until you have time to write actual chapters, a summary just isn't as good and you've come this far...

Also, I have an idea about the whole Pansy/Draco thing. I know Draco couldn't tell Blaise to make out with Pansy because a real boyfriend wouldn't say that to his best friend or to any other guy, but what if he said it to another girl? Most guys have absolutely no problems seeing their girlfriends make out with others girls so he should be able to make the suggestion no problem and I doubt Pansy would think anything of it since most people don't think of it as cheating if it's with the same sex, but if it wasn't expressly said in their vows or whatever then according to the spell it would technically be cheating. So maybe you could work that in so Draco can be released from the spell and be able to be with Hermione and tell her the truth and then help out with the twins. Just a thought. =)
person ginz
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
plz finish up the story cuz its rlly gud and its rlly annoying wen the authors dont finish up their stories. Cant wait till the nex update
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon!
person Verie
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I miss your story. I really do.
It would be a bliss if you did finish the story with more elaborated chapters. In that way readers will be able to feel the story more. Rather than a summary. That's just me. Its all into you.

I really do want to know who the father is!!!! Sooo baad.
And I'm really happy for you for you script writing. Its perfect since the guild writers are still on protest here.

person linds
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
write out the chapters, i know i'll wait. i'll take a summary if you decide you don't want to finish it. if you know you will eventually continue it then i'll be more than happy to wait. i think it's a good story and worth the wait if you're having real life issues.
person Aquamarine
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I personally would like both, if that's not too much trouble. The summary so that I can know what will happen, but whenever you find the time update it as well. I really like this story and would love to continue reading it, however first and foremost, I am dying to know what will happen.
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats great for you and i am proud of you too. as for the story i'd like it to be well thought out chaps!
person Verie
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that alright. And in my opinion if you would just write it all in fast track, the beauty essence of the story would be gone. But if that would keep you getting track with priorities then you might as swell finish it so people won't be feeling the disease of impatience. But then if you lack muses for the story there would'nt be much of a great outcome if your just going to force it right? As for me, well I'm willing to wait as long as its going to be great and fantastic.

As you being the Author you have the right and total control to decide what's best for your story. Right? :]

Whatever happens I'll still support your story. Heck, this is one great plot! :]

Verie