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draco is a funny drunk.

I think you story is going very well between D & H they are not being real mean & nasty but they are not too sweet on each other either yet, I think that she would think he was up to something if he was too nice too quick. I just wish you wrote faster. I hate to hang on the hedge. Thanks for the good read there are not a whole lot on here that I enjoy. But your's is one I keep coming back to to see if you have updated. I just hope you do finish it because I hate when I start reading one and it is good and the author decides to just stop and leave me hanging.

I love the story,but I wish you would put a little bit more Severus in it. I love him good or bad!

Another great chapter to an end, but what a cruel way to end it! Who won? Slytherin right? I hope you don't make us wait too long to let us know. ;)

I think your story is wonderful so far! One thing I am curious about is how you'll take care of Ron. I don't like Ron and Hermione as a couple, but I do love the character Ron and I hate it when people make him evil. Please update soon!

I like it, I love it, I want some more of it. :) really good concept, update soon thanks

WHO WON???????!!!!!! Fun story so far.

Okay, so totally have not reviewed yet becuase I've just finished reading the entire up to date story and LOVE IT!!!!
I love your little notes in the end, very nice :)

Anyway.
About your story. I've ready so many H/D stories in the past week they are all running together, but I like your twist on this the best so far! I love that Draco is falling for Hermione and I totally knew he wouldn't let her drink the potion as soon as you wrote that one of them had to take it, nice touch!
So, to make this story even better, I KNOW Slytherin won the game..right??? It would only be too "hot" for Hermione to be Draco's wench for the evening.

The only questions I have are "How is poor Hermione going to lose her virginity?" In the next month even.

Great story! Keep up the great work and HELL YEAH< JOHNNY DEPP on the big screen tomorrow night!! Loved your theme.

Great new chapters,
Sorry I haven't had much time to read in a while,
I've been so busyy,
But I'm veryy happyy that there were 3 new chapters of your for me to read.
Happyy youu liked the pensieve idea.
Not sure if I have any others...
Hmm...
Maybe since Draco has to make sure she sleeps with someone soon,
Why doesn't he just sleep with her ?
Youu probablyy alreadyy thought of that though.
Ooh he's gonna be mad when Ron && Hermione start to get physical.
Poor Hermione,
Not only is she pregnant and doesn't know it,
But she's not even attracted to her boyfriend.
She must be so confused.
I think she's gonna start getting suspicious soon,
I mean with her eating habits ineviatably changing, && she should soon be getting craving && stuff like that,
Plus with Draco suddenly being so nice && testing all the potions,
Wow,
That's gonna be a big blow up when she finds out what's going on.
Poor girl.
But anywayss,
I have to be goingg,
Please update soon,
I reallyy want to read what happens next,
Plus youu were veryy not nice leaving it off at a cliffie there,
So be nice !

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX

oh that is just mean! who won?! well i do hope that you have an update soon. because i may just get mad. :)