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by princesspeach

schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my !
I love that erection spell,
Very creative.
Figures the counter curse would be she has to make him climax,
That spell is so genius.
Very interesting chapter,
I still feel bad for Hermione though,
She's gonna think she's the virgin mary or something.
Youu'd think she'd notice she hasn't gotten her period in a while though,
Maybe that will surface soon or something ?
This story is getting a lot more interesting,
Can't wait for the inevitable smut in the next chapter.
I reallyy like how you've been building up Hermione && Draco's relationship as well,
Not a lot of people do that.
But anywayss,
Please update soon !

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
person pickles87
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is brilliant.
Of course the counter curse would be what she didn't expect. lol
The curse wouldn't be broken with another it seems...
Hurray can hardly wait.
After you complete this will tell hubby about it.
person Sara
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great update! i vote you bring a laptop with you when your running with the little cheerleaders (just a joke...)


and i like all these little details it makes the story more believable
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I wanted to email you about your cheer camp.
My friend and I are in charge of a cheer team. An we were looking for new cheers and other things to freshen it up.
We were officially put in charge this year for the fall season.
Interested in your ideas.
hopefully you'll be able to see my email from this review.
thanks a bunch
patty
person linmo
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't tell you how much I like this chapter. that curse was really brilliant. So they will have no choice but to have sex? will Hermione remember something?
person Sadistic_Darkstar
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really love the way your developing Draco and Hermione
person Kaya
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot :) It was so funny when Draco was drunken! Nice idea! Cant wait to read more.
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
grrrr Draco is such a ruddy bastard! lol
You soo gotta update, this story is hillarious.
person luvhp
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a total JERK! I understand why he did it, but it certainly isn't getting him in very good graces with her! So, no more R/Hr huh? Hmm.
Keep up the good work!
person urakih88
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry up wif the updating, please~~~

love this story.