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This story is absolutly amazing. I started reading it and couldn't stop for the life of me. I can not wait until you update. I wish that creative talent didn't have to take any time at all to formulate. I am not sure if this comment makes sense or not. But the only thing that is clear to me is that you need to hurry and get these two togather because clearly, I will explode. My blessings on your next chapter and be sure I will check back for it.

That was a fabulous way of letting her know! I loved it and can't wait to read more!

You are EVIL!!! I hate cliffhangers!! Awesome chapter though. The way she found out was totaly unexpected. I thought Draco would slip and say something or something to that affect, but I liked how you did it. Well, update soon (Please! lol) and have a good trip ^^

-Becky

oh the moment of truth. now it is the real prograss. When Hermione was talking to Ginny I had a bad feeling because she really talked too much. The confront was a bit strange. It seemed like going too fast. Draco was abviously hurt and his retort was hurting too but when Hermione started crying I only felt strange

This one line made the whole first chapter completely horrible for me, "The blood of Slytherin will certify that he turns out to be just as evil as I was". I don't think Voldemort thinks of himself as 'evil', truly evil people rarely do. Voldemort wants power, and immortality and he is willing to go to any lengths necessary to get achieve those ends. Having him say that he hopes his child turns out as evil as him, makes him sound like a cartoon villian, whose only motivation is to be the 'bad guy'. This story looked really interesting to me, but I just can't force myself to continue it after that one line. It makes me think that all of your characters will be completely one dimensional, which is really boring to read about. Good story idea though, and most of the reviewers seem to love it, so I'm sure it improves dramatically in later chapters.

That waz hot

I can't wait for the next chapter

That chapter was absolutely amazing, I loved all the fluff. I'm only sorry about them not actually having sex, but it made it even better, something to look forward too. I, as well, am falling for your Draco. This story is just awesome, I'm so glad I checked for updates today!!!!!!

You have an amazing writing style and I thought the story is brilliant. Keep it up and don't cry to much after reading deathly hallows altho I will probably cry too. Keep writing and have fun.
Tammy J.Kaiser

That was an excellent chapter, I just love how your keeping them in character as much as possible. I saw the new ootp film as well the day it came out. I am Draco obsessed and was disap pointed that they didn't show him more oh well, I have my pre-ordered book to look forward to which I should be picking up on saturday. Can't wait to read another one of your chapter's after though, alldabest Ang xxx

Awwe that was so cute !
I actually had an experience kind of like that with the tickling,
It really breaks the ice with an ex l0l
I really liked that bit of fluff though.
I wonder when Hermione's finally gonna clue into her mysterious 'illness'.
She's gotta find out soon.
I could see her spending hours in the library looking up the symptoms.
I just came up with that but it would be a prettyy good way for her to find out.
Feel free to use it.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
The books coming out soon too !
I'm so excited,
I get to go to this huge party in a bookstore near where I live,
&& it's gonna be basically like the Yule Ball so I'm veryy happyy :)
Please update soon !
Oh,
&& please don't write anything to spoil Deathly Hollows,
I have to wait to borrow the book so I probably won't end up reading it for a week or so,
&& whenever a new book comes out it always get spoiled for me >.<
So yeahh,
Update soon !

Much Love...
XXX
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