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I am desperate for another chapter of your amazing story! I want to know what's going on with the Figg siblings so bad!

Update please!!!!

I don't know if you are going to continue with this story, it's been about 2 years since you have updated, but i really like it so far. there is one thing that i would like to draw your attention to that you may choose to change or not. but in chapter 20 you mention the immaculate conception. what most people don't seem to realize is that the immaculate conception is not the conception of Jesus, but is in fact the conception or Mary. so if you are looking for accuracy, you may want to look into editing that section. i hope that you do continue you write. i hope to see more from you in the future.

amazing story

Excellent chapter! I wonder if Lucius or Voldemort had to say about Draco aiding in Bellatrix's demise? Please update again soon! =)

OMG I Love it! I mean sure there are a few places where I would like to tell you off really good for writing it that way but other than that it's really good. I like the way it's turning out and I totally wasn't expecting twins though I usually catch things like that. I was wondering if maybe you could kinda get rid of Pansy sometime soon cause really that girl is giving me a headach ^_^!

Wow,
I can't believe I haven't been checking this story for updates !!
I just read the three newest chapters,
&& wow !
I really wanna read more now,
I NEED to know what happens !!
It's so hard for me to find stories on here that can keep me hooked,
But you sure have done a good job of that.
Please,
Email me next time youu update,
I can't stray from this story again.
Update soon !!

Much Love...
XXX

Hi there. I have read 13 Chapters of your story now, and I love it! It's really good. The only comment I have, is that it is end of October now, so Hermione must have been missing her period for 3 months by now. Even if she thinks she can't possibly be pregnant, it would be something to be concerned about and she would have seen a doctor/healer a while back (who would then most likely have informed her of her precarious situation).

Nevertheless, I am enjoying this a lot. I decided to read it as I just finished a new Chapter for my own story, and I decided to call that Chapter 'Repercussions'. So when I saw a story with that name, I had to read it. I'm glad I did!

I am up-to-date now. Still, great story, can't wait to see how it all works out in the end.

Just a question, why would the teacher use last names for everyone except Lavender and Hannah? Shouldn't she have called them Ms. Brown and Ms. Abbott instead?

Further, for someone who's never been pregnant, you're doing an admirable job describing it.

Please update soon!

interesting plot bunny. Can't wait to read more.