rate_review Reviews

That was so fantastic! I love how we follo the story in Draco's perspective with him trying to make us understand that Harry is the bad guy and he was being used, although used deservedly to pay back all Harry had done for him (even if that wasn't necessary with the price Draco paid). Even though it was obvious you weren't writing a Harry like that since the first encounter was so gentle, his words had me empathizing rather than just pitying. I'm glad you ended this with Collin's acceptance. Wonderful job with this.

This was a really sweet story of discovery and love. I thought the part at the end with Colin really pulled it all together perfectly, making this story very poignant. GOOD JOB!

Great story! It really touched me. Thank you!

:takes deep breath and exhales:

Wow. It feels as though I've just walked an epic and complicated journey through Draco's emotions. I think it's safe to say that I'm exhausted, yet so satisfied now that Harry and Draco are together. The way you described the jealously Draco felt when Harry and Colin were going at it was flawless. I wanted to strangle someone. But alas, I didn't, and it proved to be patient when I finished reading. :] Lovely job!

very nice. eloquent and well written.
not boring at all despite the length of the narration/description.
love the angst and the love btwn Harry n Draco.
even liked Colin, when i usually dislike him.

I read everything you write. You develop your characters so well. This one was double good because I love Colin Creevy.

Wow! That was amazing! I loved it!

OMG! I cried so hard, I could barely read it through all the blurry liquid! I don't think I could ever write something this awesome. The way it started all angsty and ended all fluffy. An poor Colin. That kid's just gotta move on. I absolutely love your stories, and this was no exception. Wonderful job.

As always your stories are stunning and well written! Such an endearing short tale of love, lust and wisdom. I feel like saying it's an honor to read your tales so riddled with truth and potency but it would be stepping into the mainstream view. For now, lets just say I am truly captivated by your style and ability to capture not only the senses but emotions as well. :) Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Well, you've done it again. The sheer depth of your characterizations and the intesity of emotions and moments that you manage to describe with painful detail, again and again, leaves one almost speechless...good thing it's only almost, or you wouldn't get any feedback. LOL

Drowning in angst, breathless from rampant emotions, feverishly flushed from your amazing intimate scenes and head spinning from such well planned plots...I bow to the Master. Whatever it is that allows you to weave your amazing tales, you just keep right on doing it.

O.o?

I think I've gushed enough. Kudos, dude!