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by Vandervort

schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I think the story looks promising, BUT you desperately need a beta-reader to check your spelling, grammar and word use.
Other than that - DO Continue
person Aamaya
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. It's so different. I do hope that you continue with this story...I can't imagin that Harry will make any of this easy for Dumbledore, ugh that old man pisses me off...
person Ms_Figg
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is EXCELLENT! Just excellent. I am completely hooked. You can't make this a trial, hon. You've got to give it the full monty. :))) Snape was...ooh. Just the way I like him. I will be putting this story in my favs. Don't take too long to update.
person Darkless
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing...do continue.
person liza
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this so far. it's an awesom and original premise. i find it interesting that even with harry's being an intelligent adult that his scar is still enough to remind severus that he should hate the kid. lol. some things don't change. i'm really looking forward to where this goes
person misslala
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am truly intrigued by this so far. :) I hope to read more soon, Harry's logic is too funny. :) I can't wait to see all hell break loose with Harry Potter, muggle extraordinare become a wizard, LOL BRILLIANT!
person Faschmer
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I applaude you on you ingenious plot =) It is quite original, I look forward to your next update...
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Curiouser and curiouser. ;)

I'm intrigued and look forward to see what you do with this.

MysticSong of MystiSlave
person Leentjef
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY VERY NICE BEGINNING
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am quite intrigued by the start of this story and I would love to see what happens next. One little spelling error I happened to have noticed "except" should be "accept" for the paragraph concerning the Nobel Prize acceptance. Excellent work!!!~Sophia