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by Lucie

schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter! I'm getting a good Top!Draco vibe! PLEASE don't disappoint me. I won't say that I'll stop reading if it ends up Bottom!Draco, but it'll certainly ruin some of my enjoyment.

Yours,
MirrorWakes
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe poor draco!good chap.
person misslala
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so heartbreaking!!! Wow. I love it, though. :) I love how the characters are in a state of such need. :) I love stories like this, especially if they turn out to have happy endings. :) Aww, poor Draco, I just want to squish him tight. *sniffles*

Another great chapter, hon! :) Hope to see more soon.
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 8! They both feel the same way, have the same fears.... if only one of them would admit to it. Harry step up! Tell Draco how you feel, assure him you won't pressure him or push him.
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story.

And as I have a very odd mind, I was just wondering what would happen if it was found out that Harry was a magical creature too. Would that not mean that the savior of the magical world was less then everyone else? How would wizerding society react to that?
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Please update asap !!!!! I'm surpressing the urge of reincarnate the snake-faced bastard Voldemort and hex him into the next ten life for what he's done to Draco!! Poor Dray!!! I wanna hear him singing. Prejudice is a harsh thing, but i hope harry and draco and get over it together. Can't wait to read more. Ja ne. :D
person Morgan
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. Really, really beautiful. I'm looking forward to reading more.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this fic! I really really do.
Just... Um... Bottom!Draco isn't usually my thing... Not at all in fact... I don't suppose you could have Harry once again turning the rules of the world upside-down and prefferring submissing...? Please.

MirrorWakes
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly smitten with this story, you just have such a way with turning a phrase into an emotion. I appreciate that in a story. You have kept the urge to glorify Harry to a minimum, giving him his character wise due, and still allowing him his own faults. It is refreshing, if there is a mailing list for this story, I would like to be added please, my email is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.

Thank you,
Lunatic with a hero complex
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooooo glad that you have decided to go on with this story. I think it is beautiful and sad and can't wait to finish reading it to the end. I hope you update very soon