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by Lucie

person Anon
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm tickled pink that you have updated this story yeahhhh!!! anywho I wanted to comment on them having to leave it makes sense to do so. Where will you send them? Also I'm so glad that Draco can talk again and that he is understanding that not all elfs are evil or out to get him. Too cute the way he recognized Dobby. I hope real life will allow you to update sooner if not well we'll be here when you do. Chow
person ZooArmy
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I owe your muse a HUUUUUUUGE Thank you that it came back. *falls down on her knees* Thank you, wonderful, amazing muse!!!
person Ecks
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oomg yeah!
person misslala
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, Luce, good update! :D This is fantastic. :D I'm wondering how Draco is going to react to the kiss now. He has a voice, so he can yell and scream and fight with Harry properly. LOL That was exciting, and I'm so glad you updated! :D I've been waiting for this, hon. I hope to see more soon.
~Wench
person Angel
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I cannot wait for the next update. Update soon.
person YanaYugi
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he got his voice back
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update? it has been a while
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jesus.....That's some seriously emotional stuff. You really hit the emotion in the characters, especially with something as horrific as what Draco has had to go through. And I recognize so many bits and pieces throughout this of real world issues, especially the prejudice - it could be in relation to any kind, and in this its between magical creatures/half blooded magical creatures and wizards of all kind, whereas to me the actual emotions behind it of 'it isn't fair, how can the world be so unthinkingly hurtful' kind of thing rings of the 1950's with the segregation of black and white people, and the struggle for equality between different races of human beings. It stings of truth this story. And then you factor in how hurt Draco really is, how abused he is, and it's so much more intense for it. It might not relate to most people, but some can relate to that broken feeling, that nothing is right or ever will be and that you are dirty and it was all your fault....

But having said that, it isn't all dark. "He had met up with a group of men who called themselves
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Yeah you go Harry, harry's falling in love with poor Dray!!! He deserves some love and who else is there better than harry to give it to him. Please update, i can't wait to read for more. Hope draco would be able to speak soon. I want mush and sappiness X8. :DD See u.