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for One Sweet Day

by YamiBakura

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schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm just going to review about a million times...I hope that's okay *giggles* Maybe I'll set a precedent, because I'm anxious to know what everyone else picked too! haha

Okay, so I went back to Chapter 4 (since no directions at the bottom of Chapter 8) and I'll choose Harry winning the fight...AHA! "They have to talk"

I'm going to guess that's where I was supposed to go at Chapter 8, too??? YAY for talking? (except that "we need to talk" is code for "break up"....bad!)

YAY Hermione! *hug for 'Mione* *gasp* Do I smell hot gay teen sex in the Owlrey? *hope hope hope* YES YES YES The stage is being set for all the right things!!!!! *heart lifting* Please be gentle! (hehehehe)

*squeal* YES YES YES FUCKING YES!!! WOO HOO GO BABIES GO!!! YES YES YES Wait, WHAT??? Hogsmeade? Great Hall?

NO NO NO!! Where's the choice of "Go back to Slytherin and shag the ever-loving fuck out of each other" or "Go to Gryffindor and make sweet, sweet love" THOSE ARE THE CHOICES I WANT!!!! (haha I'm insatiable)

That being said...I'm more inclined to think they'll get it on if they stay at the castle so....Great Hall!

OH YAY!! SWEET!!! *giggle* Oh god, I don't know if I can stand Harry and Draco being mischievious together....TOO CUTE!!!!!

OH FUCK YEAH!!!! BACK TO GRYFFINDOR?/ Awwwww!
person graballz
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, they are IN the forest! OH YAY! And we're back to "friendly cute" bantering!!! *hugs self* AWWWWW! They're holding hands!!!!!! OH FUCK another choice!!!! *whimper*

I'm suddenly reminded of the "character death" warning from the first chapter....WHAT DO I CHOOSE?????? (okay, this is Chapter 12...)

I'm going to start by saying that they stay.....*gulp* *crosses fingers* please hot gay teen sex in the woods up against a tree please hot gay teen sex in the woods up against a tree please hot gay teen sex in the woods up against a tree

*gasp* Unicorns aren't carnivorous....good sign? *whimper* OH YAY! SO CUTE! Mmmmm more kissing! OH people!!! OH OH OH OH OHOHOHOHOHOHO (that's all I can say)

*blubbering mess of goo* YAY!!!! THAT WAS A GOOD ONE!!!!!! *hugs Yami* THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! You are so talented!