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by blueBerrymore

schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg poor Sev! I fucking hate Lucius in this! Where's Sirius taking him? Please update soon!!!!!!!!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, hurt-comfort just the way I like it ^^. Just... I would have liked a few more explanations of the fact that Severus just lets Lucius do *that* to him. He doesn't seem to ponder over how to get out of this situation. And, in the last chapter, it was understandable how Sirius reacted - until the point that he did not help Severus! He would have had the surprise moment on his side, but just hiding in some closet was not very Gryffindor of him, I think. I hope for an explanation ^.~ but I would be glad if you continued soon!

schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus!! Where is Sirius taking him? I hope to get help.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update.
person HeadGirl
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good...I enjoyed your writing style!
person jaydon2
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I hope you continue on with this story.
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this fic is the shit! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much. Are there going to be other chapters?
person Extraho
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i dont really know what to say, to make it short, it makes my heart ache. it so sad. please continiue i really want to know what is going to happen.