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Chapter 9: I'm thinking that Ron's automatic silencing spell on his room the night Hermione was mourning her parents indicates his unreadiness for an adult relationship - he's still too self-centered and immature, which only time can change, not the deaths of his girlfriend's parents. Sad, but he's not grown up enough to be a match for Hermione, no matter how much he wants to erase his poor behavior and be there for her now.

It's comforting for Hermione to see how Snape identifies with her anguish. Obviously he wants more, but he's right to not push his interests on her at her most vulnerable.

So I guess we'll have a lot of Muggle-dressed magic people at the funeral all sporting black clothes. With Harry to help the Weasleys and Hermione to help Snape (if he even needs it) they should all be indistinguishable from the Muggles.

Snape needs to be careful that Voldie doesn't see him 'courting' Hermione, unless Snape can come up with some reason why he should be doing it for the Dark Lord's glory. Snape's already a Halfblood, so it wouldn't make much difference to Voldemort if Snape got entangled with the Muggleborn witch. A child of hers and Snape's would combine some heavy duty 'smart genes' and that might even be attractive to Voldemort. It would be shivery if Hermione realized that she was being coldly stalked for her brain by Voldemort and know any false move on her part could mean death for Snape.

I think Snape needs to brew up some strong rat poison and drop some in Voldie's tea. But I guess the horcruxes would shield the Dark Lord. Pooh!

i like your story can't wait to read the next chapters

Yet another wonderful chapetr.Go on !;)

Great update. I am looking forward to some romancing on Severus's part towards Hermione so they can move on and be together.

Chapters 1-8: I'm so sorry for Hermione who has lost her parents so horrifically. It's too bad Ron got so fired up over Hermione and Severus, and he should have given her a chance to talk, but he really wasn't so far off the mark, was he? He loved her and it might have been that feeling that allowed him to 'see' more than the others.

At least Harry and Ginny are doing well, even if it's all done in secrecy.

Hermione is ensconced in Snape's home, but that's just playing with fire. They're already sharing kisses. What more will happen? And when will Snape be called back to serve Voldemort? Scary stuff ahead, I bet.

Let me know when you have another chapter, please.

(You have two chapter sixes.)

Sad but so sweet. I love the two of them together through bad and good.

I am wondering exactly what is going on with Severus. I know the obvious but what is he healing from and what will have with Severus and Hermione.

Ron is such a jerk and needs to leave Hermione alone and let Severus help her and himself heal together.

Very pretty story. You express the ways of depression very truly and in order too haha. Please do keep writing it I would love to read more ^^.

Hi,
compared to Spinner's End Severus owns here a great manor.I wonder if the elves are the only one knowing about Hermione's tastes?

Ron is a jerk but Hermione will be better off with Severus anyway. Great update.