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I like it. Please update soon.

how is chapter 12 coming along

Good work, are you still actively writing on this? I hope you will.

Hi Alabaster,I like your strory sooooooo much.But I would like to kill Voldemort for his bad timing for summoning Severus.But this gives you at least an nasty cliffhanger.I hope that Severus will not be too badly injured or maybe you just want to give Hermione the opportunity to heal and comfort Severus.But pleeeeeease,don't be too harsh to them LOL Sureves Epans

I like it. Please update soon.

Chapter 11: Hermione is very strong to manage to eat because she knows her friends want her to. She has a loving heart and it's a shame she had to lose her parents as she did.

I wonder how Ron felt knowing Hermione was going home with Severus. (I wish I could go home with him...)

A Muggle nightgown pushing Snape's 'envelope'. Maybe it will find a way to cradle, squeeze, fondle and lick his 'envelope' too. Ooooh, sexy just like Beauty and the Beast, my favorite fairy tale. Actually I wish Disney would have made their cartoon feature more like your story. Hot stuff!

Well, crud. I should have paid more attention to the chapter title. (Okay, this reader can laugh a little now that the pain is receding.) Damn that Dark Lord - he's got the timing of a teenage girl's father turning on the front porch light at just the wrong moment.

I do hope Severus isn't damaged too badly when Voldie gets through with him. I want him capable of a lot more than merely holding hands with bandaged fingers when he returns.

An exciting, but teasing chapter. Cruel, just cruel.

What a way to cool off a session of making love. Update soon I want to know what Voldermort will do to Severus but at least Hermione will be there to help.

Chapter 10: Poor Hermione, standing there accepting the commiserations of her parents' friends and co-workers when she is so cut up inside herself. No wonder she collapsed.

I guess her dreams are leading her in the same direction that Severus' waking thoughts are going. I'm hoping those two paths merge at some point when she's not so desperately unhappy and in shock.

It's very thoughtful of Molly to try to get some food into Hermione, making all her favorite dishes. I hope Molly's idea works. A nice transitional chapter moving our two main characters forward. I worry a bit about Ron's reaction when he discovers Hermione isn't really his any more.

Another hot chapter.

I like it. Please update soon.