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by hfreak

person kylanSB
schedule February 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
are you H-Freak on fanfiction? i see you are still active, please don't give up this story. shoot me an email at kylanSB@gmail if you want help with your writer's mental block.
person blazeofglory15
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, probably my favorite on this site, i love the way you make it fit with the books, following the characters' moods and fights with each other and giving them more depth and new twists. in a way you've remade some of the characters, especially hermione, but i think that it is just adding to the characters' personalities.

well done, six out of five stars. three thumbs up!
person hpotter
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well... not bad, the smut is good, but is the typical fic. all people are perfect and gods-of-sex, while Ron is stupid... and what is the matter with Hermione?... She IS a whore... maybe a whore in love, but a whore!... She was hoping for Ron to begin happy with it?

In general, not bad... keep writing...
person SOE
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Was really looking forward to the Harry/Ginny scene so I'm dissapointed to see that it isn't on the index page anymore. Overall, I've liked most of it.
person Tri
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is really good. Though, could it be possible for a Snape/Hermione chapter? *puppy dog eyes*
person kyle
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! plz continue writing. you have my support!
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love Harry and Luna together. That was a hot little interlude, and terribly realistic of the characters. I laughed out loud at the yak cheese! So funny. And yes, I agree, I see Luna as very limber and open about sex, too. Thanks for a great re-interpretation to that scene.
person Nix
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed reading this story and especially liked the Hermione/Ginny scenes. Thanks for working on this great fic and sharing it with us here. I'd love to see more supplements and to see Devil's Lust cotinued also.
person CrazyGuy
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whens harry gonna get some?