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for Deception

by brayzen

schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story, more from how he knew something was different from how tight she was.

I would love to read how he goes and figure out that one out, please continue with the story.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has great promise to be a story.

Like how Draco's going to feel when he finds out? What Hermione's reason was for doing that to him? And Pansy's reaction to it.
person ichiruki
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would be interested to see more should you take it past a one shot!
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'd like to see this continue.
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I would definitly like to see you continue this.